As a sci-fi writer I have neither intent nor interest in predicting the future. I’m in Ursula K. Le Guin’s camp, when she said “Science fiction is not predictive; it is descriptive” – sci-fi in its best forms tells us something about the world today, not about what the world could be a 100, or a 1,000 years hence. The science in science fiction is there to engage the reader, and help suspend disbelief over faster-than-light travel, radical bio-engineering, or sentient AIs – the impossible marvels that enable sci-fi plots. Good sci-fi deploys a narrative of science in support of an entertaining and interesting story – great sci-fi uses that science narrative, like Shakespeare said, as a mirror held up to nature, that let’s us see ourselves in a new light.
Still, if this was just about readers with over-optimistic hopes for the future, I would hardly be concerned. Optimism is a good thing, right? But as a recent book describes, this projection of sci-fi impossibilities into the near future is a scam that many of the most wealthy people on Earth are riding to ever greater riches and power.
M-E-F is a hard book to describe. It takes as jumping-off points three major frontiers in science, technology and society: Artificial Intelligence, Extended Life and Immortality, and the Colonization of Space. Becker looks at these “big ideas” from two sides. First is that of the bombastic “visionaries” and billionaires, and their outlandish predictions, like:
“2029 is the consistent date I have predicted for when an AI will pass a valid Turing test and therefore achieve human levels of intelligence. I have set the date 2045 for the ‘Singularity’ which is when we will multiply our effective intelligence a billion fold by merging with the intelligence we have created …Ultimately, it will affect everything, We’re going to be able to meet the physical needs of all humans.” Ray Kurzweil
“I would love to see a trillion humans living in the solar system. If we had a trillion humans, we would have, at any given time, 1,000 Mozarts and 1,000 Einsteins.” Jeff Bezos
“The true battle is: Extinctionists who want a holocaust for all of humanity. — Versus — Expansionists who want to reach the stars and Understand the Universe.” Elon Musk
Ok, pretty out there statements, but isn’t articulating pie-in-the-sky BHAGs what innovators do? Becker looks deeper into the world of these latter-day Nostradamii and finds important context, like in Effective Altruism. Hmm, earning more in order to give more, sounds great, almost virtuous, right? Of course the most famous – and notorious – exponent of EA was Sam Bankman-Fried, founder of the FTX crypto exchange and multi-billion-dollar swindler. Yes, Bankman-Fried and FTX did donate some millions of dollars to actual charities, like $3.7 million to Deworm the World. But his bigger play was in organizations like the FTX Future Fund. This group advocated longtermism, the notion that philanthropy should be evaluated based on effects over very long periods of time. Again seems common-sense, but advocates for this pose cases like so:
What if a 1,000 years from now humanity goes extinct?
And what if I invest my $10 million right now in something that, over time, will prevent that?
Isn’t the benefit of my $10 million therefore infinite, since avoiding extinction allows all of humanity, in uncounted future billions, to continue to live?
What is going on here is that longtermism is glib rationalization that allows Silicon Valley types to invest in whatever they want, and say it is helping humanity in the future. It’s just a scam.
Scams on science are as old as, well, science. Perpetual motion scams flourished in the 19th century, while modern versions offer things like cars running on water that splits itself into hydrogen and oxygen, burns those to create power, then captures the resulting water to keep the perpetual cycle going. And there’s Elizabeth Holmes, who obtained millions in funding for a magic but non-existent blood testing device.
These scams work because people want to believe. For an example, look at the 1-star reviews of A City on Mars, an objective analysis of how feasible it is for Humanity to live on that planet. Spoiler: it ain’t feasible at all, some of the reasons being: the radiation will be quickly fatal; there’s no water; and perchlorates in the soil would poison you and make agriculture impossible. Yet negative reviewers say things like this:
History shows that humans constantly solve problems and create new tools. Judging space exploration based only on what we can do today ignores the fact that science and technology are always moving forward. What seems impossible now might be normal in the future.
Newsflash: There’s never going to be a Star Trek personal force field that blocks radiation – either you need to go about sheathed in lead, or live 100 meters underground.
Alright, this post is getting long. One last thing: The billionaire Illuminati are doing more than just give interviews. Paul Waldman of Public Notice recently brought all this into current focus in a post entitled “Big tech is coming for the midterms”. What do we learn here? Some excepts:
…venture capitalists Marc Andreessen and Ben Horowitz, OpenAI president Greg Brockman, and other leading lights in the Valley, said it raised $125 million in the second half of 2025 in preparation for the midterms. Meta created a network of super PACs aimed at influencing federal and state elections; they say they plan to spend $65 million this year. According to Americans for Tax Fairness, Elon Musk has already spent $71 million ahead of the midterms in donations to super PACs and Republican groups.
… Anthropic CEO Dario Amodei has predicted that within five years, AI could eliminate half of all entry-level white collar jobs and produce economy-wide unemployment over 20 percent. Mustafa Suleyman, who runs Microsoft’s AI efforts, said in February that within 12-18 months, everyone who works on a computer could have their job automated.
No one knows how accurate these predictions will turn out to be, but for the sake of argument let’s accept that at some point in the future, AI will drive millions of people out of work, and they will be unable to quickly find jobs at similar wages. What happens then?
The answer some tech leaders give is that there’s no need to worry, because AI will create a utopia of limitless wealth.
“There will be universal high income (not merely basic income),” says Elon Musk. “Everyone will have the best medical care, food, home, transport and everything else.”
Andreessen predicts basically the same thing: “A world in which human wages crash from AI — logically, necessarily — is a world in which productivity growth goes through the roof, and prices for goods and services crash to near zero. Consumer cornucopia. Everything you need and want for pennies.”
Sound familiar? These are the promises of science fiction, where energy is free and replicators instantly make everything we need. But these predictions don’t come from doe-eyed optimism – they are calculated pitches intended to convince all of us that if only we get rid of those pesky regulations, if only we stop worrying about unemployment, then billionaires like Musk will give us this idyllic future. All we need to do is elect their candidates into positions of power.
All I can say is this: Enjoy your SF, but don’t let these singulitarian robber barons, well, rob us.
That time of year, for a look back at what I’ve read since Last January 1. First a quick writing update:
Have gotten a fair amount of beta feedback on FORLORN TOYS and I have to say, it looks good. Some of the positive feedback I’ve received was about pace – several readers said “page turner”! Also the cast of characters and the multiple points-of-view structure of the book seem to be working. Now, the book is in the hands of my developmental editor. That process will look at the foundations of the book – worldbuilding, characters, plot – and will weigh in on how they can be improved. I expect to get that report a bit before Christmas, and then I’ll take stock on what updates/revisions to do.
Meanwhile I’ve already started work on the follow-on. Don’t want to say much so early, but I will give the title: THE HUNGRY JUDGES. It’s inspired by some lines from Pope:
… declining from the noon of day, the sun obliquely shoots his burning ray; the hungry Judges soon the sentence sign, and wretches hang that jury-men may dine.
– Alexander Pope, The Rape of the Lock
Now, on to the books!
Science Fiction & Fantasy
Adam Roberts’Lake of Darkness is a “concept” book. The blurb proclaims this, when it says “Good is a construct. Evil is a virus.” So, how did the concept read?
The book has big ideas that are pretty cool. The main plot is kicked off when two FTL spaceships meetup to investigate a black hole. Someone on one of the ships, without warning, murders all their crewmates. The crew of the second ship intervenes and among the things they find out is there are some sort of signals coming *from* the black hole – which of course, should not be possible. Another cool thing is a subplot about a thrill-seeking adventurer, kind of like a present-day YouTuber, who proposes to walk on the metallic core of a planet. This is an undertaking of mega-proportions, including excavations of tunnels leading to aforesaid core. Finally there’s lots of sciencey and social evolution stuff just thrown out there without much comment – for example, we learn that Nobel prizes are now handed out based on worldwide popular vote, and so there are tens of thousands of such prizes every year. Coming back to the “evil is a virus” thing, as the book unfolds we see that the compulsion to murder that seized the person from the first starship is a bit contagious.
How does all this work, as a book? I give it very high props for inventiveness but in the end the story did not bring me anywhere. Not that I expect or want a Hollywood ending with Hallmark-style moral, but when I reached the end I was disappointed the inventiveness did not say more.
One Level Down by Mary G. Thompson is a short work, 128 pages. It starts out on a colony planet, a hardscrabble place. A young girl, Ella, is on a fieldtrip with her schoolmates to the place where a spaceship landed everyone some years back. The setting is meadow and forest, and Ella claims to have seen a rabbit. But we immediately learn that all of this is a computer simulation, created by Ella’s Dad. And Ella knows more about what has happened to bring everyone there than other people know. Things are going wrong in the simulation – there used to be birds but now they’re gone, and the truck that took the class on the fieldtrip suddenly disappears. A mysterious “Technician” will soon arrive and supposedly they will fix everything.
I won’t recap the whole plot, I’ll just say a lot of it is about Daddy-issues – Ella is actually 60-some years old but her father has locked Ella’s simulation at about the 5 year-old level. The meaning of the book’s title is this: Ella discovers there’s simulations within simulations within simulations. And there’s a bit of a found family ending, with Ella exploring the multiverse with some new comrades. So pretty good SF worldbuilding and story, but I would have preferred less Daddy-issue stuff.
Speaking of found-family, You Sexy Thing by Cat Rambo is 100% that. The subtitle of the book, “The Disco Space Opera Book 1”, totally proclaims what you’re going to get. The main character Niko Larson is a female former admiral in the space force of the “Hive Mind”, a kind of Borg-like galactic power. With Nico are a motley crew of former teammates, including: Dabry, an eight-foot-tall, four-armed alien with Iron Chef-level cooking skills; the squidlike Skidoo; and Thorn and Talon, twin were-lions. The title of the book is the name of the sentient ship that the gang commandeers and makes their own.
How to describe the book? Umm, stuff happens, I guess. A lot of stuff. The two biggest bits involve an exiled space princess and a vengeful space pirate. Come to think of it, there’s very little in this book that can’t be reasonably prefixed by the word “space”.
How to sum up? Lake of Darkness and One Level Down were big idea books – LoD especially – and they made my head hurt hunting for deep meanings. You Sexy Thing is as close as you’re going to get to a plain ‘ol fun SF read, no deep thinking required.
It’s hard to establish a new book series. Worldbuilding is more important, you need a setting and premise that readers will want to visit over and over again. Character is always important, but for a series you need to make sure your character(s) have enough room to change and grow over multiple books. Finally, story has to be there, but no more than in a standalone – in fact you want plots that leave lots of stuff unanswered, so you can have more to write about in books 2, 3 and beyond.
The Fourth Consort by Edward Ashton aspires to start a series. I’m afraid it falls short. It puts forth a space opera world with two major powers: The Unity, and The Assembly. The main character, ex-soldier Dalton Greaves, is a human who is working for Unity on first-contact missions. The problem in the story is that the Assembly sends a first contact team to the same planet where Dalton is working. So Unity and Assembly are competitors, and over the course of the action we find the Assembly are more compassionate and egalitarian than Unity. The title of the book comes from how the planetary matriarch takes a shine to Dalton and names him her consort – she already has 3, so he is the 4th.
The problem with this book is it’s too shallow. Dalton has little in the way of aspirations or problems – he’s a slightly confused everyman who serves as a vehicle to learn all the facts about the aliens, and about Unity and Assembly. In the final chapters I was skimming bigger and bigger chunks. Don’t think that I’ll look at any subsequent books in this series.
Here’s another series: These Burning Stars, the debut novel from Bethany Jacobs, and book 1 of a trilogy; it came out in 2023, books 2 and 3 came out in 24 and 25 respectively. As the winner of the 2024 Philip K. Dick Award I had high hopes for this book.
Alas, it fell short. This is another space opera. The dominant polity is called the Kingdom, and it has 3 ruling castes: Clerics, Secretaries (technocrat types) and “Cloaksaan” – soldiers. Their respective attributes are: Righteousness, Cleverness, and Brutality. As you might guess, there’s a grimdark vibe in this book, which is not to my taste. Among the main characters is Esek Nightfoot, a hyper-competent (I hate it more already) female cleric who is driven to dominate everything she encounters – politically, militarily, and sexually. Her seeming adversary is “Six” – in the Kingdom you have to earn your name and you’re referred to by a number until you’re 15 or so – or until you die. And – who would have seen this coming? – Six is the only being in the universe who can match Esek in skills, cunning and self-centeredness.
To which I say: Ho hum. There’s a zillion other characters in this book, and they are all defined by their relationship to Esek: fearful, worshipful, resentful and so on.
I did not finish These Burning Stars. It descended into one implausible encounter after another, so I guess you could say the burning stars fizzled.
Rivers of London is the first book in a very successful series of 10. The author Ben Aaronovitch has written for Doctor Who, Blakes 7 and other series, and was GOH at BOSKONE 2024. I had high expectations for this.
The worldbuilding in Rivers of London is tremendous. The idea of elves, faeries and animate spirits being real and hidden all around us has been used in many fantasy works, from War for the Oaks (which has a real claim as the first contemporary urban fantasy) to Harry Potter. Aaronovitch’s version has an earthiness to it, I think because his conception is so tightly tied to the places and vibe of London. On top, the notion that you have detectives who specialize in supernatural crime is also not new – “ghost detectives” have been a staple of Asian fiction for centuries. Again, bringing the idea into Scotland Yard and having rivalry with non-supernatural crime fighters made it fresh.
Now the bad news. This book desperately needs an edit. There are more than a few “traveloguey” sections of several pages where Aaronovitch waxes at length on the details of Covent Garden, or the decor of a river spirit’s flat. And the main character Peter Grant is not my fave, and in fact is kind of a jerk as his romantic interests oscillate between his human friend Lesley and various female animate spirits.
But still, I’m glad I read it. I can see why there were nine more after the intro.
I got Future’s Edge after reading a review in Locus, that said “Future’s Edge is a fun, generally fast-paced space opera.” Also the book’s blurb alluded to space archaeology, which also features in my work-in-progress FORLORN TOYS, so I thought I’d see this author’s take on it.
This turned out to be another story about a thrown-together band of plucky adventurers striving to save all life in the galaxy – no pressure, right? The archaeology was extremely light: sometime in the past the main character got exposed to a 50+ million year old alien artifact and something happened that essentially gave her super-powers. Now the plucky band is on a quest to get back to that artifact because it is the key to thwarting the “Cutters” – savage aliens bent on killing everything. One interesting fact: The main character, Ursula, has an ex-boyfriend, Jack, captain of the warship Crisis Actor. When Ursula meets up with Jack, he is now *married* to the Crisis Actor – it is an AI sentient ship that can manifest in a robotic humanoid body that, like Data from the Enterprise D, is clearly “programmed in multiple techniques”.
This book has a lot in common with You Sexy Thing. It could be that cozy Science Fiction is a bigger trend than I thought.
Next to last in SF & F is Slow Gods, by Claire North. I also came to this from reading a review in Locus, that ended “I hope Slow Gods will appear on awards ballots, best-ofs, and many to-be-read piles. I expect it to prove to be one of the best science fiction books of 2025.”
The book certainly lives up the the “slow” in its title. Now, I don’t need firefights and amazing discoveries on every page, but you have to give me something. The main character is named Mawukana na-Vdnaze, who thankfully goes by “Maw”. After some grim dealings on his home planet – there everything you do, including just being born, incurs debt – Maw is made to pilot a starship. Because of the way the author conceives of FTL travel, the brains of pilots rarely survive more than one trip. But something happens with Maw and it turns out he can survive and remember multiple trips. This makes him the natural vehicle to chronicle a slowly unfolding – over centuries, if not millennia – catastrophe of supernovae and the waves of destruction they project.
For me, all this chronicling is a major problem. I’m 33% into the book and I’ve yet to see Maw do anything. He sees, he relates what has happened, but not much else.
There is an aspect of the book I find maddening: tons of synthetic pronouns. Because there’s lots of alien species and lots of new, alien-specific genders, apparently he/her do not suffice. So we get sentences like “I looked to Rencki for advice, but whether because qe had none or qis processors were occupied elsewhere, qe said nothing.” Other formulations include xe, xer, xis, and te, ter, tis.
The Locus review pointed out cases of political allusion in the book. I’ve yet to really get that. The starting point of the society obsessed with debt is so heavy handed its more like a cartoon; I haven’t yet got to other political references. Regardless, I’m put in mind of Isaac Bashevis Singer’s famous dictum on the purpose of literature: “To entertain, and then to instruct.” So far, Slow Gods is not entertaining me.
Tales of Galactic Pest Control is 33 stories, mostly new, some old, and all about dealing with alien pests – or i should say, pests that are alien to the residents, as in a few stories it’s humans that are the pests. Here’s a sampling of what you get:
David Gerrold explains how tribbles came to be and what they really mean.
Stephen Chappell writes about Clyde and Ray from Acme Pest Control dealing with a transdimensional wuzzlesneus.
In a story from 1950, Reginald Pretnor relates how gnurrs come out of the woodwork, and how they can be used in war.
In the Slime of Life, Edward M. Lerner tells how a sentient planet deals with that most pernicious infestation, men.
This is old school SF story telling – much recommended.
Writing
When I got Future’s Edge by Gareth Powell, Amazon had a deal where I could get About Writing for free. This is a “craft” book – the category writers use for books about how to write.
For me personally it was not super-enlightening, but if I had read it 3 years ago, it would have had a much greater impact on me – it’s just that I’ve already absorbed a lot of what Powell writes about through other books and experiences. But if you are interested in writing and want to explore making a go of it, this is the most inclusive book I’ve encountered. The structure is great. It starts with practical advice on how to organize as a writer – for example you have to take a lot more notes than you probably think – Powell’s recommendation that note-taking and idea recording have to be part of your day-to-day is solid. Likewise, his emphasis on knowing what your book is about – the theme and the idea, as to opposed what happens in it – is spot on. Then the book goes on to more detailed topics: Knowing your genre; How to get published; Finding an agent; Working with editors; Marketing your book; and so on.
The book has lots of Powell’s own experiences and techniques, which makes it more real-seeming. One of those examples gave me the one really new thing I got out of this book: I’ve been seeking an agent for 2 years now. In that time I’ve got hundreds of rejections. Many say “I just didn’t fall in love with your book”. That made me grumpy – what is this, Valentine’s Day? But Powell pointed out that getting an agent who doesn’t love your book makes no sense – how can they wholeheartedly sell it otherwise? Now while those rejections still sting, its not the fall-in-love part that’s responsible.
Speculative Whiteness by Jordan S. Carroll, a 2025 Hugo winner, was an eye-opening book. You can’t be an SF fan, much less an author, without having awareness of the connections the genre has to the far right: You probably know about sad puppies, that Heinlein had a strong affinity to right-wing tropes, or that Orson Scott Card is highly homophobic. But for all that, I always had the sense the genre, almost by definition, was inherently forward looking and would leave those negative ideas behind.
Speculative Whiteness paints a grimmer picture. On the 1st page you learn how the first major neo-Nazi party in the US was led by an SF fan, who was in turn inspired by a far-right SF author. From there the book jumps to define metapolitics – a political model that leverages popular culture to build a sense of inevitability or inherent rightness behind a movement’s ideas. The book’s thesis is that the far-right connection to SF is a metapolitical strategy intended “to transform white nationalism from an unthinkable possibility into an inevitable future.” A critical bulwark of this strategy is the worldview that only white-people are mentally equipped to envisage the future. Every time a far right figure asserts that people of color are unable to plan rationally and can’t resist acting impulsively, they are laying claim to the idea that only white people can create meaningful SF.
The book has 4 sections: An introduction explaining metapolitics; “Invaders from the Future”, that covers Nick Land, the appropriation of geeks and nerds as natural alt-right members, and how genetics will eventually lead to a “marching morons” world that the nerds have abandoned ; “Whitey on the Moon” about the tension of NASA spending to send white people out to explore, vs. the ignored plight of non-white people; and a conclusion, “Tomorrow Belongs to Everyone,” a short piece that highlights recent progressive SF responses to the alt-right.
Speculative Whiteness could be “too much information” for the average fan. But if you care about the genre and/or intend to work in it, I would say it is an essential read.
Although Reverse Colonization, by David M. Higgins, is cited in Speculative Whiteness, that is not how I happened on the book. I came across it in this Substack, by Noah Berlatsky.
The subject of the book is stories where white people end up on the receiving end of being colonized. Probably the best well known such story is Wells’ War of the Worlds. Why do these stories exist? The book cites several drivers:
By claiming the role of the victim, colonizing societies perceive justification for their actions.
Through the acts of resistance typically presented, colonizers create a narrative of their own resourcefulness and self-sufficiency.
This is a dense book that examines its subject from many angles. For example the chapter “Victims of Entropy” looks at the writing of J. G. Ballard and Michael Moorcock, relative to the theme of imperial decay. Higgins asserts that Elric – sickly and weak – represents the British Empire and the his sword, StormBringer – black, vampiric and addictive – represents colonialism, which the Empire is trying to break away from but never totally can. Too florid of an analysis? Maybe, but I can’t deny it is thought provoking.
A data point on how relevant this is outside of SF: The Substack I linked to at the start of this bit is entitled “How Fascism Explains Trump’s Tariffs.” In the article Berlatsky notes how often Donald Trump says other countries are “ripping us off”, “making us look like fools”, and “they have allowed fentanyl to come into our country at levels never seen before … nobody’s ever seen anything like it.” What Trump is claiming is victimhood – just like the white characters in reverse-colonization stories are victims – to justify his tariffs.
This is not a book for fans, or even very many writers. But it is a great guide to the more esoteric underpinnings of the SF genre.
“Wonderful” is the literal best way I can describe Adam Roberts’Fantasy: A Short History. Despite the qualifier in the title, the book is encyclopedic: it covers everything from Gilgamesh through Beowulf through Bunyan, the Victorian Era, the fantasy trends and sub-genres of the 20th century, and the same for the 21st. Through all that Roberts mostly keeps an intriguing thread: Despite the common wisdom that Fantasy is somehow “about the past” and Science Fiction “about the future”, Roberts contends the opposite is true. Over and over again SF takes something in the past – like WW2 – and projects those same circumstances onto an imagined future; while Fantasy concerns itself with worlds that never have been, but could be. Some highlights:
The Ballantine and DAW Books Fantasy “boom” of the 70s and 80s.
Romantasy, Grimdark, and Video Games.
This is a scholarly book, but highly readable. Recommended for authors and fans alike.
The Great War and Modern Memory by Paul Fussell is a book in the mold of Fantasy: A Short History – though I should say the other way round, as Fussell’s book preceded Roberts’ by decades, and takes on a culturally much more significant topic.
The “modern” in the title means much more than “recent” or “up to date”. It is an attempt to capture how different an effect the Great War had on the psyche than previous wars. The pre-modern memory would recall wars as epic, tragic, ennobling, or any other of many grand literary themes. For Fussell, the memories his war invoked were ironic, futile, pathetic. The Great War was not merely larger in scope – it was an entirely different thing than any war that had come before.
Literature is Fussell’s context to examine these memories. The range he covers is vast: the troglodyte metaphors of the trenches; the naming of the enemy, “he”, while the British are always “we”; mythic appearances, like the Angels of Mons; the “theater” of war as both reality and farce; and the pastoral homoeroticism of “soldier boy” stories.
I can’t convey in this little space what an affecting book this was for me. Anyone who proposes to write about war in any fashion must read this book – along with, I would say, John Keegan’sThe Face of Battle, published in 1976, a year after The Great War and Modern Memory.
In the late 90’s, Mike Resnick and Barry Malzberg, long time stalwarts of the SF genre, started a regular column in the SFWA Bulletin about the business aspects of writing. Ultimately they put out 47 such columns, most of which are compiled in The Business of Science Fiction.
The articles here date from 1998 to 2010, so this is a bit of an historical document. Even in 2007 Resnick and Malzberg were skeptical on e-books, holding that while they would eventually become popular it would take a long time. That very year the Kindle was introduced. In 2007 the global ebook market was $33 million. In 2024, it was $20-40 billion.
Yet other of their observations seem to me very relevant. Resnick had a great example on differences between agents: His first agent always sold to the same publisher and never made any foreign rights sales; he switched to a new agent that ran auctions for his books, and made 31 foreign sales in 18 months. I’d love to have problems like those – hope I get there.
Their take on conventions was interesting (Malzberg anti, Resnick pro) and their collective advice on professionalism seemed to me spot-on. One chapter titled “False Doctrines” seemed a good take on how wrong common wisdom can be. Example, in 2008 they both advised to skip the common-wisdom first step of selling a bunch of short works to magazines and then start trying to do novels. Even then the short fiction market was radically shrinking and they were right to call this out.
But in the end I have to say this was mostly a nostalgic look at a world that has since radically changed.
Non-Fiction
The first presidential election I voted in was 1980. I recall the decade as perplexing. Inflation was high – 13% – but Volcker got it down to 1% by 86. Reagan fired air traffic controllers, cut taxes, was important in the fall of the Berlin Wall. Myself, my wife and lots of our friends didn’t agree with what was happening, but all in all things didn’t seem so terrible. I daresay the years since have made clear a different conclusion.
It is the late Reagan era where John Ganz’ book, When The Clock Broke, begins. In it we learn how all the things that are so radically, tragically wrong today had their seeds in the late 80s and early 90s. Among the characters Ganz profiles:
David Duke, avowed KKK member and author of a sex-help book for women. While he won only a single election, for Louisiana State Representative (he served 2 years,) over time he ended up normalizing white supremacy as a political position.
Ross Perot, loopy populist billionaire (sound familiar?) who actually wanted to increase taxes on the rich (*not* familiar).
Pat Buchanan, anti-foreign intervention, anti-immigration, anti-abortion, anti-gay, and likely anti-semite.
Newt Gingrich, one of the originators of winner-take-all, zero-compromise politics.
The book ends with the election of Clinton, the very year that The End of History was published, arguing that liberalism would be the dominant political theme of the years to come. That didn’t quite happen, though today various pundits and politicians are talking about “what comes after” Trump and MAGA. When The Clock Broke shows how the roots of the MAGA movement are deeper than just Trump … in that light, the MAGA movement may last longer than expected.
If you are interested in politics, this is highly recommended.
Abundance by NYT columnist Ezra Klein and contributing writer at The Atlantic Derek Thompson has been the subject of mixed responses from Progressives. On one hand many like it because it optimistically echoes the big goals of the New Deal era; on the other, many condemn it as inherently elitist and non-responsive to the most important injustices in the US. So, what is “abundance”?
The core idea is that the origin of many of our most pressing problems, around housing, energy and transportation to name a few, is in scarcity. Housing is super-expensive because there is not enough of it. Same for energy. The argument Klein and Thompson make is this scarcity is an unintended consequence of government policies – many of them supported by progressives – that individually are reasonable but in the aggregate create major roadblocks to making new stuff. An oft-cited example in the book is the California High-Speed Rail Project. Originally conceived in 1996, the idea floundered for years without a clear vision. In 2008, voters approved $33 billion for it. In 2011 when Jerry Brown returned to the governorship, he made it his signature project. The Obama administration strongly supported the project. But in 2018 Brown started lowering expectations, and Newsom, governor since 2019, dinged the project as too costly and taking too long. Today construction is active on only 119 miles of track, out of a total length of 776 miles.
The cause of this non-progress? The book submits it is the massive amount of negotiation – over eminent domain, over environmental impact, with unions, and more – that holds everything back. While many might debate the conclusion, its hard to get over the fact that in Canada – which has laws, government, and unions much as we do – builds a kilometer of rail for $295 million, while in the US it costs $609 million.
Abundance by itself is not the answer we need. But ignoring its arguments risks condemning us to the same old/same old. Highly recommended.
The Notebook, by Roland Allen, is a kind of book I love: Exploration of a workaday, overlooked bit of history that has had unexpected impact over centuries. The title tells you what it is about. Some highlights:
Paper first was manufactured in volume in 13th century Italy. Empty ledgers were among the very first things made from the paper.
Ink can easily be scraped off parchment, but it sinks permanently into paper and can’t be erased. Italian merchants seized on this property and starting recording financial information in notebooks. Around this time they invented double-entry bookkeeping.
In the 14th century, Geoffrey Chaucer was an English diplomat in the court of Genoa. There he learned about Italian commercial innovations, read the Decameron, and became a convert to the Italian practice of zibaldone – a vernacular journal where one copied passages from books you read, before the valuable book was returned to its owner.
This book encompasses a lot – police notebooks, author’s notebooks, journaling as self-care, naturalists notebooks and too much more to list. If you have an interest in the important minutiae of history, this book is for you.
I’m reviewing Farewell To Reality and The Ant Mill together because they are both about the same thing: The state of theoretical physics today and how it got there. I read these books because in THE HUNGRY JUDGES, theoretical physics plays a part, and I want to get a sense of the terrain.
I daresay most SF fans have at least heard of The Standard Model, String Theory or possibly Quantum Gravity. The Standard Model is the framework of particles, forces and their interactions that make up matter and energy: protons, neutrons, electrons, quarks, bosons, fermions, electromagnetism, the weak force, the strong force, stuff like that. The Standard Model doesn’t have a good answer for gravity – it postulates gravity is “transmitted” by a particle, the graviton, but this has not yet been proven. The first bits of the Standard Model date from the 1920’s, and its greater part was in place by the late 80s. In 2013 the Higgs Boson was confirmed.
The Standard Model explains a lot but not everything. So for decades that is exactly what many physicists have been pursuing – a Theory of Everything that unifies Relativity and what it says about space and gravity with the Standard Model. String Theory first emerged in the late 1960s and has been through too many iterations and side-branches to count. Quantum Gravity is more of a category that encompasses many discrete theories, like Loop Quantum Gravity, M Theory, or Noncommutative Geometry.
Jim Baggot and Jesper Grimstrup in their respective books cover the landscape I’ve outlined. But their purpose is not purely informational; they jointly make the same case, that, for decades theoretical physics has been stuck in a closed loop, making no progress. The crux of this is how these candidate theories are virtually pure mathematics – while the relevant super-complex equations may balance out, there’s no way to experimentally prove their assertions. Without the pressure and confirmation of experiment, this work devolves into a kind of navel-gazing tribal activity – Grimstrup cites personal experiences of how certain conferences are informally “String Theory only” while others are “Loop Quantum Gravity only.” Researchers work on papers that are increasingly small refinements of their chosen tribal theory. And they have many co-authors, because in the physics science establishment, numbers of publications and numbers of citations all add up to more grant money.
If you are interested in this, YouTuber Sabine Hossenfelder, a theoretical physicist herself, has many videos on the topic.
So in my layman’s reading, the human race is not much closer to a “Theory of Everything” than it was 30 years ago. Maybe for me as an SF writer that’s good – since the specific answers to this stuff are not known, then I can just make stuff up! My main candidate to steal from is The Information Theoretic Universe.
And The Winner Is …
My favorite book of 2025 is not going to win a Hugo, be a bestseller, or even a medium-seller. It’s a Fantasy story with likeable, grounded characters, enough of a plot to keep you reading, an easy-going style, and *not* grimdark but with an optimistic message. It is a very authentic book, that is no more than it needs to be.
The book is Whisperlights, by Canadian Philosophy professor/Author Brendan Myers. In it we meet the twelve year-old Athena Kildare, her mother and father, and mysterious wizard/mentor Dubhdarra, who Athena claims materialized into a man out of a flock of birds. Dubhdarra gives Athena a magic token that will allow her to call upon him three times, then departs into mists. Not long after, Athena her parents, and her whole village are abducted by soldiers, as laborers or conscripts.
This is where the journey begins. Athena must abide her captivity a while, growing and learning. When the time is right, she breaks free. Then, aided by chance companions and sporadically guided by the faerie-like whisperlights, she seeks the Scatterlands, which contain the Gates of Morning. There, Athena will demand of the gods why they allow so much injustice in the world.
No, it is not a super-philosophical, allegorical kind of book, and that’s one of the reasons I like it. Myers keeps a light touch on his theme, with a good flow of action and rest, success and betrayal, all the stuff a good genre story should deliver. And the ending, I daresay very true to his Canadian outlook, is entirely common-sensical.
I’m looking forward to this author’s next books – I hope others will check him out.
Whew! A longish post, to be sure, hope people will get something out of it. Let me close with a snippet from the just-started THE HUNGRY JUDGES, where one of our heroes, Promakos, is talking with their aide de camp Andrew:
“It took some doing, but I have contrived a shipment for Vargas Station, fifty-four containers classed as ‘repair components’. At the same time, I have completed arrangements with the factor on Zerua for twelve kilograms of plutonium 239, also to be delivered to Vargas. Finally, all non-Hellenic operations on the station have terminated, everyone not an H-S employee has vacated.”
Promakos inclined their head gently.
“Excellent! No one can do logistics like a soldier – you have my thanks.”
Andrew blew out their cheeks.
“Don’t thank me yet. The time may come when you wish I had not enabled you to build three fusion bombs.”
“Four, or possibly five,” Promakos corrected. “I believe we can improve on standard designs and use less plutonium per package.”
“I wonder why we even need one,” Andrew gave back, almost wistful in his tone.
“Andrew, I daresay when we are certain of the need, it will be too late to build that one bomb.”
Lots of writing work happening for me in the new year. I’m finalizing my query and synopsis for Stone By Stone, and I’m starting on a new SF piece, with the hopefully engaging tentative title Forlorn Toys. But this being January I feel like taking stock over some of things I read in 2024 – reading is also part of the work of writing. Here’s my list:
SF Classics
These were to fill in a bit my exposure to important past works.
The Fountains Of Paradise, by Arthur C. Clarke
I read a lot of Clarke in my 20s, notably Rendezvous With Rama and 2001. I decided to read this to reacquaint myself with Clarke as a writer.
The standout things here were first how conflict and peril free the story was. There certainly was conflict, in the form of the protagonist meeting opposition to his ideas for the space tower. But that was so mild, more like being frustrated at work because of a project put on the back burner than the typical clash-of-titans conflict you’ll see in a contemporary SF. And the peril … well, certainly people could have died, but what you really get is Clarke-signature competency bravura, as the protagonist has to MacGyver his way out of a space tower disaster, several hundred clicks above the surface of the Earth.
And the ending couldn’t have been more optimistic: In a few hundred years, every social problem we have seems solved, and we meet cool aliens to boot! I’ll vote for that.
For all the predictability and mildness, it was an enjoyable read.
My take is this book was just puzzling, is best I can describe it. As one of the first and probably the best well-known alternate history SF book, I had high hopes. The book started with interest, albeit a bit slow. I read this last March, so I only recall so much: The guy who is secretly a Jew who wants to make jewelry, the guy who sells antique Americana to the occupying Japanese, a possible Nazi defector and a mysterious plot, plus the couple going to visit the titular “Man in the High Castle”, the in-book author of an alternate history work where FDR lives to be president and the Allies win WWII.
Great setup … then the book just ends. I can’t say what the message was, maybe that all history is fiction.
So, interesting artifact, zero help to me in anything I do.
Solaris, by Stanislaw Lem
Another classic. Before starting this I had read a bit about Stanislaw Lem, and learned he was a philosopher and poet as much as an SF writer. So again, high hopes here.
Alas, I could not finish this. It was just epically too slow, it felt like it took an entire 20 page chapter just to get to the protagonist’s room on the space station. Then what I believed was the core concept, an intelligent planet, just seemed overly trite to me.
I’m sure there was a ton of depth, nuance and meaning there – it will have to fall to others to find it.
The Complete Stories of J.G.Ballard, by J. G. BallardI really only heard about J. G. Ballard in 2024, though the FB #Science Fiction group. Who knew that the author of the WWII/Southeast Asia novel/memoir Empire of the Sun was also an off-the-wall SF writer? I chose the short stories with the idea this would be the widest introductory read for this author.
My assessment was mixed. Lots of cool ideas, but the vibe is definitely of its time, kind of a mix of Twilight Zone and PD James. Example: An unaccomplished man, a life-of-quiet-desperation type, discovers he has the ability to cause the death of people just by willing it. First off, this has got to be a super-common fantasy. I’ll admit that I have had it and thought about writing the same concept. The man moves up the corporate ladder by eliminating rivals, then critics, then just future possible contenders. But the man is also increasingly worried about being found out and concludes there is one more death needed to secure his safety, it is … wait for it … YOU, the reader! Prepare for the end! Holy Fourth Wall, Batman!
I haven’t yet finished the collection. Every so often I read one more story.
New Guard SF & Fantasy
These were all part of my now ongoing mission, to read more of what the SFF market is buying and publishing today. Well, when I say “today” I mean anything from today to the past 20 years.
Mistborn, by Brandon Sanderson
I was a big fantasy reader in the 70s and 80s. Then, The Sword of Shannara came out, I read it, and I lost interest in Tolkien-derivative doorstop-sized fantasy series. But hey, 35+ years have gone by so why not give the genre a fresh look? I had to start with Brandon Sanderson, mainly because I knew what I’d be getting if I read George RR Martin. Mistborn was Sanderson’s second published book; I chose it because it anchors a highly successful 7 book series.
Alas, could not finish this book. Too many tropes: the D&D like setting, evil nobles and cynical but heart-of-gold thieves, a mysterious evil lurking just out of sight. The place where I stopped was a 20+ page section of excruciating detail on the world’s magic system, which in summary is: swallow some shavings of a certain metal, you get a certain power, swallow another metal, you get another power.
My doubtless rosy memories of reading fantasy are about being transported to a new world. Mistborn transported me to a so-so RPG.
The Name of the Wind, by Patrick Rothfuss
My desire to find fantasy that would spark my interest did not end with Mistborn. Can’t remember how I came across The Name of the Wind, probably while looking for best-of lists. When I saw on Amazon this book has over 83,000 reviews, virtually all of them 5-star, I had to give it a try.
Now, to go back to Mistborn, that was a well-written book. There was action, conflict, worldbuilding, etc. It was just not to my taste. The Name of the Wind, however, for me was not well written. The form of the book is, mysterious innkeeper Kvothe has a mysterious visitor to the inn. There’s a fight, there’s drinking, and then Kvothe begins relating his life story. There seems to be no realtime action in the book, its all past backstory. I suppose as the setup for multi-book series, you can try this, relating the life-to-date of the protagonist.
And what a life. If Mistborn was trope-y, NOTW is the Trope King. Please, other writers, never again write how a young boy, off fetching water, returns to find his parents and community all murdered by mysterious, well, murderers. And the pace. The narrator can only relate a week or two of personal history before he’s wracked with sad recollections and has to excuse himself to feed the horses or whatever. I made it to page 190 of 696 (!!!) before I stopped, having to go off and feed my own horses.
The Death of Sir Martin Malprelate, by Adam Roberts
C’mon, fantasy – you must have some good books, right? I came across Adam Roberts again from the FB #Science Fiction group. Roberts is a writer, seems to me, in the Tolkien-mold: A professor of literature, and clearly writing for himself more than for any market. I chose The Death of Sir Martin Malprelate because it was only a year old, and the premise – 1848 London – intrigued me.
This bet paid off! Roberts deftly invokes the world of Sherlock Holmes, by imagining his father, Vavasour Holmes, working on a case. No spoilers, but other classics of British lit, set in the late 19th century, make appearances here. the actual titular death is by a “demonic locomotive” – remind you of any spectral hounds? The opening sentence firmly tells you what the voice of this work is going to be:
The story of the death of Sir Martin Malprelate acquired, from its earliest telling, a phantasmagorical quality, shrouding the violence of the assault in an embellishment of diabolic spectres and uncanny mystery.
This book will never become a NYT bestseller, which is a shame. Highly recommended.
The Hammer and the Blade: An Egil & Nix Novel, by Paul S. Kemp
Above I mentioned my desire for fantasy books to transport me to new worlds. Well an important sub-genre of that is when the new world doesn’t take itself too seriously. Looking around for Fafhrd and the Gray Mouser style books I found a number of folks citing the Egil and Nix series. Book 1 of the series The Hammer and the Blade, did not disappoint.
in summary: Egil, hammer-wielding priest, and Nix, a scoundrel as Princess Leia would describe, make a living as tomb robbers. In one robbery they awaken a demonic guardian. Well, they have their Hammer and they have their Blade – they kill it. Little did they know that the demon was the talisman of a corrupt and powerful wizard family. Wizards want revenge. Hammers and Blades want to avoid that. Poundings, stabbings and drinking ensue.
Also in the never-a-bestseller category, but a fun read. Recommended.
Too Like the Lightning, by Ada Palmer
Now let’s look at some SF reading. This was another FB SF group find. The author Ada Palmer, is a professor of history, specializing in the Renaissance period. Too Like The Lightning was her first book. The title is inspired by this quote from Romeo and Juliet, where Juliet ponders whether loving Romeo is a good idea:
It is too rash, too unadvised, too sudden, Too like the lightning, which doth cease to be Ere one can say ‘It lightens.’
The author’s knowledge and affection for history is apparent: The 25th century she describes is a world of 5 or 6 regional confederations, in the model of Italian city-states, but at much greater scale. These confederations are all led by technology-centric aristocrats, all with different styles, stemming form the cultural differences region to region. Ok, interesting setup, if a bit abstruse.
Unfortunately, I ended up skimming through vast swathes of this one. There was too much interiority of the main character – I wanted something to happen. Once again, a matter of taste – others may well find this book riveting.
Snow Crash, by Neal Stephenson
Cyberpunk is a big gap in my SF canon reading. Never piqued my interest, the sub-genre seemed too small scale, too inward looking. Also, being a software engineer for like, forever, I suspected the computer parts would leave me cold. But minds can change and no time like the present. I selected Snow Crash because of Neal Stephenson’s reputation as being a challenging writer.
Challenging isn’t the word I would use, based on this book. After only a few pages the words running through my head were: Glib, Lame, Ridiculous. Harsh, you might say? In the opening pages we learn in this world, the Mafia rule the USA, controlling not only the government but a majority of businesses. the protagonist is a combination hacker, expert swordsman, and pizza delivery driver. Apparently in the future, “30 minutes or less” is enforced by Luca Brasi, so you have to drive fast. It goes on to describe a system that, to the books credit, is almost exactly like Second Life. Kinda cool for 1992, but that’s it.
This thread from Y-Combinator says it all better than i could. A sample:
I greatly dislike Snow Crash: it feels like slogging through Leviticus, plus an astronomical amount of suspension of disbelief.
The Parable of the Sower, by Octavia Butler
In speculative fiction circles this book is constantly cited, as a prescient and gripping story of climate change and decay of the social fabric. Published in 1993, nominated for a Nebula soon after, the book remained a genre thing until 2020, when it became a NYT Bestseller. So, this is a must-read.
After all this build up for POTS I was surprised at my experience of reading it. My opinion: It is not a good book. Some examples: Future southern California is afflicted by human-set wildfires (something which BTW has happened for decades). The people setting the fires are drug addicts. That’s all we are told and the story frankly lays the blame for all that on these anonymous zombie addicts. But why are they addicts? Does no one care? We never find out. Normal people all walk around armed, if they can manage it. Apparently this is to defend against opportunistic thieves. But we never see anything of what drives that: Is it poverty? Rage? What? The world we see is cardboard. There’s bad stuff happening, but why? No one knows.
All we really see in the book is the protagonist, Lauren. She is even more cardboard than the world. Her big thing is she invents a religion, “Earthseed”. Chapters are introduced with writings from her book of this religion. So, cool, I think, this religion is going to illuminate the problems, and then solve them. The prime tenet of Earthseed; Change is the only constant.
But, guess what? This religion has zero narrative impact. Nothing happens because of it. The final 2/3rds of the book is Lauren and a band of stragglers walking north, trying to get to this lake. Every day some flat, slightly tragic event occurs. Then every night, people talk around the campfire. Neither the protagonist, nor anyone else, changes. A few folks die, then the book ends.
I could go on. Here’s a critique that said it all better. Disappointing.
Station Eternity, by Mur Lafferty
Ok, now we’re getting back into more readable space. There’s several cool ideas in Station Eternity, by Mur Lafferty. Like, there’s some quality or quality attached to the protagonist such that murders consistently happen in her presence. Another one is a race of highly mineralized aliens that, in the maturity phase of their lifecycle, transform into a living artifact, like a space ship. Ok, it does strain belief a bit that a half-ton creature somehow morphs into a multi-ton spaceship, but the idea is still cool. Then, there’s the symbiotes that all sentient life *except* humans have. Except that is for Mallory, who … dang, I guess I spoiled it.
Net: Clever worldbuilding, good characters, good pace of action.
Gideon the Ninth, by Tamsyn Muir
Hmm, where to begin on this book. The capsule: Lesbian necromancers – in space!
Now that I think about it, the capsule is also a pretty complete summary. There’s quite a lot of characters in this book. The premise is, representatives from 5 or 6 necromantic planets meet on this one particularly spoooooky planet to undergo a trial. Aside form the title character, Gideon, those characters are all pretty interchangeable. Then, stuff happens: monsters are fought, puzzles solved, and so on. There’s little discernable point in this action, but it is entertaining.
The ending was, to me, very emo. Gideon, who you come to kinda like by the end, sacrifices herself and it is a big deal for some of the surviving characters, but for the life of me I can’t remember what was the point.
For all that, in at least one way this is an important book, in that it is an avatar of squeecore, a story style that emphasizes delight or excitement, vs. conflict or character growth. For a more in depth definition, see here.
Mystery
I’m also a big mystery fan – for a long, long time I read more mystery than SFF. Here’s this year’s selections:
The Wolf and the Watchman, by Niklas Natt och Dag
This is a Scandinavian noir, set in 1793 Stockholm. It was a grim time, especially in cities, and Natt och Dag shows every bit of that. The wolf of the title is Cecil Winge, an educated investigator suffering from tuberculosis; he can die at any time during the book. The watchman is Mickel Cardell, a soldier until he lost most of an arm, now a watchman who spends more time drinking than watching. Mickel happens upon the corpse of a horrific murder, Cecil investigates, and they partner up.
Two things to bear in mind about this book: First, it shows very graphically a lot of the ugliness of 18th century life; sometimes it is a bit like a Salvation Army polemic. Second, the book has an offbeat structure. Midway, whole chapters are devoted to new point-of-view characters and we don’t see much of Mickel or Cecil. At first I wonder, what does this have to do with the murder? But these chapters pay off well in the end, stick with them.
So, this was an engrossing read. The Wolf and the Watchman is first of a trilogy, the subsequent books take place in 1794 and 95. I may pick up the next one, if I get a sense it won’t cover the same ground as book 1.
Blaze Me A Sun, by Christoffer Carlsson
Another Scandinavian noir, I came to this through an NYT recommendation. Summary: A serial killer terrorizes a town, first eluding the town’s detective, then being identified by a chance relationship. But 30 years later the detective’s son, now a cop himself, questions his father’s handling of the case.
This is a somewhat slow moving book, but that’s the point: It is about attitudes and truths that persist over time, and how those are handed from generation to generation. I very much like a hard-boiled, this is my code and I’m sticking with it type of noir (see below) but this was a great change.
The Hunter, and The Outfit, by Richard Stark
Richard Stark is a penname of Donald Westlake, overall the most prolific American genre writer of the 20th century. His books have been made into no less than 20 movies, including The Hot Rock and Cops and Robbers. I had heard of Westlake but knew nothing about his contribution to the structuring of mystery and suspense fiction until I read Perplexing Plots. So I decided to take in a couple of Parker books, a series of 24 novels (!!) by Stark/Westlake.
A pseudo-intellectual review of this kind of book makes no sense, so I’ll just say this: If you think you might like a world of ruthless yet grimly principled men, women who are scorned, taken advantage of and who fight back with the weapons they have, and where money means more than justice, these books deliver. The writing is spare, witty, and fast-moving where it needs to be.
I’ll be reading more of Parker, not only because I like the mix of premise and voice Westlake created, but also because I’m curious: How the heck do you keep this fresh over 24 books?
And The Winner Is …
The genre book I both enjoyed the most, and got the most out of, was …
Children of Time, by Adrian Tchaikovsky
This book, published in 2015, hits all my main buttons for science fiction: Science, in the form of relativistic interstellar travel, uploaded personalities, accelerated evolution and more; Aliens, in the form of earthly spiders who are recipients of aforesaid acceleration; and a Problem, in the form of a collapsed Human Empire, survivors looking for a new planet, and the afore-foresaid spiders, who have the planet and ain’t giving it up. The writing is a bit challenging, requiring the reader to pay attention, which i like. And the structure, which alternates chapters between spiders and humans, kept the anticipation for the next turn in the plot at a high level.
The book is just what-if after what-if, on a scale of millennia.
One thing not in this book: character development. Generally I find flat characters only work for certain kinds of books. In this book, I did not notice or care about the absence in the least.
This book is first of a trilogy. Not sure if I’ll take in the other two, not because I wasn’t sold by book 1, just just because I expect I have a lot of reading ground to cover in 2025.
There you have it. But BTW, I did a lot more reading than this in 2024: there were writing-craft books, political books, popular science books, etc. Maybe that will go into another post. That is, if my two ongoing projects, Stone By Stone and the brand new Forlorn Toys, allow it.
This weekend past Kim and I attended BOSKONE 61, at the Westin in Boston’s Seaport District. Seeing as it’s been 40+ years since I went to one – my spotty memory tells me I saw the trailer for STAR WARS at the 1977 con – it felt like I was due. And more to the point of something, since now writing (and hopefully selling) SF books is my job, this was an opportunity to reconnect with today’s SF & Fantasy zeitgeist, as it were. Below are my scattered observations and reflections on the whole thing.
The Vibe
I had no set expectation of the what the atmosphere would be like, other than vaguely nerdy. The nerd was definitely there – gents sporting steampunk kilts is a strong indicator. Overall though the feeling to me was pretty quiet. Maybe all of us wearing masks cut down on ad hoc conversation, or pushed it to the food and drink areas? Hard to guess at attendance, my estimate was 1,000 – 1,200. Since we were there only for the daytime program, maybe we undercounted?
A definite thing both Kim and I saw right off was that con-goers were definitely on the gray side, in which we include ourselves of course. I think this is a well-known thing, as documented here; in the 1950’s the average SF reader was in their 20s, today that average is in the 40’s.
My experience was people were friendly, orderly in queues, and all clearly happy to be there – since my most recent experiences with convention-events have all been in the high-tech world (cutthroat is not an inapplicable word there) that was a welcome and enjoyable difference.
The Panels
This was my focus at BOSKONE. I attended seven panels and two “kaffeeklatsches” – roundtables with 8-9 participants. Everything I took in was writing- and publishing-oriented, but for one science-themed panel.
General observation: Far and away the most common answer panelists would offer to questions, either from the moderator or the audience was (wait for it ….) “It depends.” I get that every story is different, in some way at least, and that there’s no magic formulae for things like getting an agent or being traditionally published (otherwise we’d all have agents, right?) but, c’mon. I would have liked to hear more of the panelists’ personal views on the things that got raised.
That to the side I got value out of pretty much every panel. All About Chapters was discussion about, well, chapters – how long, how many, how to start and end and so on. Reasonable observations there on how when chapters rarely end in cliffhangers, a book feels too slow paced, but when there are too many cliffhangers, the books seems one-note and unconvincing. Your Editor is a Monster (For Your Own Good) was about working with editors. This panel included guest of honor Ben Aaronovitch; I found him informative and funny on this and another panel he was on. For example Ben reflected how he’d gotten to the point as a writer where he has the knowledge, and power, to ignore his editors, and he cited some instances how that wasn’t a good choice. Big message to the session was partnership with an editor, and reining in one’s ego.
The editor-panel was one where I asked a question. (Aside, I made a point in being upfront in all panels and I was the first audience questioner in all my sessions – so I got that going for me.) Anyway my question was about developmental edits, and how you can determine when that is a good investment. This was one of those “it depends” answers, though they did reflect on how if your book has few or no “in love with it” supporters, it’s probably not a good use of resources.
The Alternative Publishing panel was super-informative for me. Going into this I thought of alternatives as primarily self-publishing, with a tiny bit of so-called small press – publishers, many of them decades old, that are like the big houses but focus on the SF genre and its sub-genres. What I found is there’s an eco-system of three-four person “presses” that outsource a lot and focus on a really small number of titles. Such a concern might be two authors, an editor, and a jack-of-all-trades, all working part-time.
Last panel I’ll highlight was Story Structures Other Than the Hero’s Journey. If that’s new to you, quick summary: Joseph Campbell synthesized an idea of a “mono-myth”, a universal template for heroic stories that many myths and fables employ, and that gets endemically used in storytelling today. Example: Luke Skywalker is told by Obi-Wan he should go off and fight the Empire; Luke declines, saying he already has a life; His aunt and uncle are killed and Luke takes on the quest; Luke finds his helpers in Han, Chewy and Leia, and also has the talisman of the lightsaber; Yoda becomes Luke’s mystic mentor and also tests Luke in the cave … I won’t reiterate the whole plot of STAR WARS but every one of these is a hero’s journey step. IMDB lists thirty-five hero’s journey movies; Goodreads has twenty-seven books.
Problem is, as much as this story structure works and is generally satisfying, it’s predictable and frankly corny. The panel was supposed to be about alternatives to it.
I wished they dug into the topic more. There was a lot of critique of Campbell – he really cherry-picked myths to get to his “universal” conclusion. And there was a lot of cultural commentary, about how hero’s journey is “too western.” I guess I agree with that, but this part of the discussion was too much about cultural identity and not enough about story-telling.
My question to this panel: Are there examples from literary fiction, where hero’s journey is rare, that we can draw upon to write new SF & F stories? All the panelists but one were stumped by this, unable to name a single literary work, let alone discuss one. The outlier – Ben Aaronovitch, who suggested I look at The Salteaters, a book from 1980 about black faith-healers in a fictional southern city.
I’ll close this part with the kaffeeklatsches. I’ll do the second one first, hosted by Dana Cameron. Dana started writing mysteries, then went on to urban fantasy, and some horror, and now is developing a historical noir set in 18th century Salem. I really wanted to hear some tips and advice from an actual working author … and, as way back in the day I worked in tech with her husband James, I had a bit of an intro. Was a great talk, about things like maintaining focus while writing, books we’re reading, and goings-on in the publishing world. Also present there was Nicholas Kaufman, a mystery/fantasy/horror writer.
The first kaffeeklatsche I went to was with three agents, those divine beings with the power to elevate one to being, ah, “agented.” The lead was Joshua Bilmes, who has been working SF&F for forty years; with him were John Berlyne and Stevie Finegan of the Zeno Agency (UK); Joshua’s JABerwocky Agency does US-rights for Zeno authors. This was a fantastic nuts-and-bolts talk, though not without its “it depends” moments. All nine of us at the table were authors, aspiring or low-midlist-ing, all eager to get quality advice. Some of the Q&A:
When should I follow-up on a query, is three weeks too soon? I was surprised at this, even I know the answer is, you don’t. Joshua made that plain when he said, “My preference for you to follow-up is never.” The agents did talk about how packed their days are; consider they may work with 20, 30 or more clients. While that work is very sporadic – clients spend most of their time writing – sometimes it gets intense.
I’ve self-published some books, is it possible to now get an agent and a traditional publisher? I was pleased to hear the answer, that while in the past the answer was “no”, today it is a clear “yes”. What matters is the quality of your work. There’s even a small advantage in self-publishing, in that it demonstrates ability to finish something, and to do things like marketing on your own.
One of my questions, If after months you’re having no response/requests for more info in querying a book, is it better to revise the book and try again, or start fresh with a whole new book? There was some “it depends” waffling, but Stevie had the answer I wanted: “Every next book you write will be better than the previous. Better to push forward with the best possible product. And your previous books will still be there.” I may well face this very situation and I’ve started a new work – hearing this from someone in the biz upped my confidence in that path.
Final bonus nugget of wisdom, from John Berlyne in response to a question on query letters:
“Original” is a dirty word in this business, never put that in your query. Publishers don’t want original, they want things like what’s selling already. Besides, if your work is original is not for you to say.
The Art
The art show and auction was small (or so Kim tells me) in comparison to other cons she’s been to lately, like Anime Boston. We were able to see it all in thirty minutes I’d say. No major themes, I’d say fantasy art slightly predominated over SF. Only a small amount of spaceship art, it seemed robots, steampunk and aliens were more prevalent – that and dragons, krakens, and maidens stopping/strolling/ running through ethereal forests..
The three examples above are pieces we came away with. The birds on either end were free giveaways, from the collection of Abby Cinii, an active and much-beloved fan who passed away in 2020.
The piece in the center we bought, it’s the work of Anne E.G. Nydam, a blockprint-artist and poet. Anne was on two of the panels I attended and her affection for her subject matter of animals and the natural world really impressed me. I’m looking at getting her bestiary, On the Virtues of Beasts of the Realms of Imagination.
The Books
I was amazed at the variety of books on offer, literally hundreds of titles you will never find in a bookstore. For me there seemed a lot of focus on specific audiences – for example, if you like books about gender-curious werewolves, well, there’s likely such books there. Which is all fine.
I selected the four books above partially at random, partially because they were authored by panelists. I wanted to both take advantage of the opportunity to get books I’d otherwise never see or consider, and to support the larger community – if Science Fiction and Fantasy gets reduced to just what you can get on Amazon, or what comes from traditional publishers, that would be a loss.
The Takeaway
So there it is. Now that I have this baseline, for future cons – not just future BOSKONEs but Readercons and I’m sure others – I can target what I see and do much better.
For BOSKONE 61, it was a great weekend and a valuable one. Maybe it’s over-confidence (not always bad) but I came away thinking, I can do this author thing. And I’m also confident that somewhere in all the myriad identities I saw in play, there’s space for an irreverent, judo-expert, spaceship-piloting woman investigator, and her grumpy alien boss.
In the spirit of year-end stock-taking and new-year resolve, I thought I’d record some highlights of my reading from 2023. Non-fiction first …
David Leonhardt is a long-time NYT editorial writer. Ours Was the Shining Future is a survey of American political history and progress through the 20th century to today, specifically from the standpoint of the “American dream”, that our children will have better lives than us; I think most people believe that is no longer a guaranteed outcome. The ultimate conclusion of the book is the rise of a “far left” or “academic left” in the 1960s undermined the more bread-and-butter agenda around jobs, education, and core social support that was set in place by the New Deal – seeking the perfect of eliminating discrimination and redistributing wealth was the enemy of the good of union jobs and accessible education. Whether you agree with his conclusions or not, the book is a valuable survey of how we got here.
Joseph Henrich is an anthropologist who studies and writes on the intersection between culture and economics in the modern world. In this work WEIRD is an acronym for Western, Educated, Industrial, Rich and Democratic. The US, Great Britain, and Western Europe are the main examples of WEIRD societies. So, there’s no real question that these countries are more prosperous and powerful than countries in the so-called “global south” and, while the gap is closing, WEIRD countries collectively still are “ahead” of the countries of Asia. No question but that the “whys” here are complex, the history of colonialism itself makes these raw comparisons highly flawed.
Still I think Henrich’s argument is intriguing. The nutshell version: Dictates from the Catholic Church from the 1st millennium AD, forbidding cousin marriage and promoting primogeniture, undermined the historical family-tribal model of European society and opened the door for individualism. Imagine being a Gallic or Germanic tribesman, circa 500 AD. Your life would be determined by your family, and you marrying your cousin is what your family would choose – that strengthens the family because, unlike an outsider, your cousin can be trusted. Your overlord has probably sired children with multiple women, all of whom have a stake in the overlord’s domain. Now when the church forbids all that, you have to marry an outsider. Your family is less and less able to control your life, so you start making your own decisions on who to marry and how to work. You might leave the farm, move to Wittenberg and join a guild. Meanwhile the overlord has to invest in alliances, accommodatio and politics, he can no longer rely on a pre-made army of sons with their respective armies to fight for him. Finally, the book is not just supposition, there’s lots of data and current studies, my favorite of which is embodied in this question: “Generally speaking, would you say that most people can be trusted or that you need to be very careful in dealing with people?” Spoiler: 2/3rds or more people in WEIRD societies answer that people *can* be trusted; in non-WEIRD societies, its only 1/3rd. This higher level of trust lets us form partnerships , make contracts and do all sorts of cooperative things more easily and at a higher rate. Anyway, cool book, highly recommended.
Mark Z. Jacobson’s No Miracles Needed is an exhaustive review of how with wind, solar, and green hydrogen, we have all the tech we need to respond to climate change. Someone on the interwebs telling you we absolutely must have carbon capture or we’re all dead? This book is the encyclopedic answer to how that ain’t so. Also covered here, something new to me when I read it, is the ongoing cost of air pollution – every year 7 million people die due to direct effects of combustion pollution. A must-have reference for anyone who wants to discuss this issue at a detail level.
Last in non-fiction, Ed Yong’s An Immense World. In keeping with its subject – how the five senses work for all manner of animals – this is a sensual, easy-flowing book. A concept Yong addresses early on is the flaws in thinking of senses in terms of “strength”. For example we generally assume and think that dogs’ sense of smell is “more powerful” than ours. This isn’t true as an all-encompassing statement; there are some odors dogs are unable to detect that humans sniff out pretty deftly. The discussion of pain as a sense was very thought provoking. Typically we think of sensing pain as requiring self-awareness; so fish, being obviously *not* self-aware, we conclude don’t feel pain. But fish have pain receptors similar to ours, and injuring a fish causes brain activity similar to our own. And injured fish exhibit behaviors consistent with “suffering”, like passing up food. The conclusion, pain for a fish is undoubtedly different than it is for us. That doesn’t mean it does not exist.
The book is a travelogue of animal sense, from mantis shrimp 12-color vision, to elephant infra-sounds, to octopus’ independently intelligent tentacles. Highly recommended.
Now on to fiction. I’ll start by touching on some less-than-favorites. First was Tough Guys Don’t Dance, by Norman Mailer. I picked this up in service of a goal to read important New England writers and this was on the list. And Mailer was famous for hanging out and writing in North Truro, where we have our beach place. In fact many of the settings in the book were familiar to me. Aside from that, book was junk – a more self-indulgent, joyless text you will never find. Every paragraph screamed, “I’m Norman Mailer so by definition this is great!” Yuck.
A goal in 2023 was to read more recent Fantasy and SF. To that end I got Babel, by R. F. Kuang. The story is about an alternate 19th century Oxford, where magic is real and is enacted by engraving text upon silver bars. The gimmick is the text is a phrase in a chosen language that embodies some idea or effect. Thus translators and linguists who understand the family trees of language are important. So the concept is clever and who doesn’t like Oxford? Babel has all the ingredients for classic fantasy of the cerebral sort in the vein of Jonathan Strange and Mr. Norrell. Alas, while the writing was workmanlike, I found the story dull and the characters flat, mostly whining about trivial misfortunes while they possess unique powers to actually do things that they never really use. And I found the ending pointlessly bleak.
Last in the not-so-favorite bin was The Long Way to a Small, Angry Planet (Wayfarers Book 1) by Becky Chambers. Speaking as an author (such as I am) this was a well-done book. It moved right along, the characters were differentiated and all had clever quirks and motivations, and the SF world-building was clearly thought out. But it was just not to my taste. It was kind of like a TV show – think Rodenberry’s Andromeda – with predictable characters and action. At the start a plucky heroine with a mysterious past becomes a crew member on a hyper-space bypass construction ship. The first forty pages are introductions to her new crew mates and its like the whole cast of Friends is there – there’s the brainy one, the grouchy one, the ditzy one, and so on. I am a bit amazed this won a Hugo; again its probably more about my taste than anything else.
Now on to my faves for fiction:
Also part of my what’s-current-in-SF reading were A Memory Called Empire and A Desolation Called Peace (Teixcalaan Books 1 & 2) by Arkady Martine. I’m a big fan of culture as part of SF world building and Ms. Martine’s conception there is nuanced and completely credible. Galactic empires have existed since the Lensman series, if not before. Teixcalaan is an empire aware of its strength but conscious of its weaknesses. Its almost as if the leading characters sub-consciously sense the dangers of assuming a manifest destiny. A small example, the imperial police, who possess a group consciousness, are called The Sunlit. Sorry, but that is just plain cool.
The main characters are pretty good, exhibiting a gamut of moods and attitudes: funny, optimistic, inquisitive, disheartened, affectionate, and more. No one is an “epic” character, they are more ordinary people coping with extraordinary times, showing flashes of both strength and weakness in the process. For my part, this is a more credible Hugo winner.
Dragon Chaser by Tim Stretton was a fun read. Stretton was one of the drivers of the Vance Integral Edition, the preserved complete works of Jack Vance (my copy is shown at the top of this post.) So Stretton is very much a Vance fan and a writer who can emulate Vance’ voice in new, enjoyable ways. Dragon Chaser uses Vancian themes of sailing, abstruse sports, and magic, combined with a hero that is competent, tending towards the ironic, but ultimately honorable. Spoiler: No one in this story has a tragic backstory, everyone is personally responsible for their own flaws and strengths. Highly recommended.
Thus Was Adonis Murdered by Sarah Caudwell is a sort of book increasingly rare nowadays, for two reasons: First its a classic whudunit, being a story about a murder that is deductively solved by the detective; and second, it is an epistolary novel, i.e. the story is conveyed via letters read by the detective or to the detective.
These well-done structural elements are grand, but the book’s great achievement is the character of the detective, Oxford don Hilary Tamar. Hilary is witty, detached, precise, insightful, and polite less because of empathy to others but more because rudeness is inherently boorish. Last cool point: Hilary’s gender is never mentioned.
I read this before Babel – it must have set my bar for an Oxford novel higher than it otherwise would have been.
Last one to note today, Continental Drift by Russel Banks. This came from the same list of essential New England writers that gave me Mailer and Tough Guys Don’t Dance. And like Mailer, Banks is a “literary” author.
That’s the end of the similarities. Continental Drift is a heartbreaking book, the characters are flawed but hopeful, trapped by their pasts but constantly fleeing them – they’re ultimately doomed and we know it, but we have to read anyway. To all that Banks adds an almost magic scene-setting and sensuality, as the story moves from New Hampshire to Florida to further south in the Caribbean. The further south you go, the stronger voo doo becomes and the characters cannot escape its power.
I could not take a steady diet of this. But once a year or so, a book like this is a great reminder that writing needs to be about more than the three act grind with the Hollywood ending.
That’s all for now. Maybe next time I’ll share some updates on my own writing. Take care …
A big part of being a writer is reading, which you have to do on several levels. I find there’s no better source of ideas than reading, especially when you go outside your favorite categories. Four years ago I came across Gods of the Upper Air, about the early-20th century birth of anthropology as a science, transforming from an essentially racist point of view to one that strove to understand cultures instead of ranking them. This reading led to many ideas that are now part of my WIP Only’s End.
Of course there’s reading for pleasure. Some of this for me is re-reading, especially Jack Vance or Patrick O’Brian. A pleasant new discovery this year was Sarah Caudwell. Her Oxford don detective Hilary Tamar is a fresh take on the classic deductive sleuth.
But that overlaps on the third type of reading – reading for work. As Samuel Johnson put it, “No man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money.” For a long time I’ve scamped keeping up with trends in my writing genres, and the past few months I’ve been looking at what is currently popular in SF and Fantasy. Writers should be telling stories out of their own vision, but at the same time ignoring what is successful in the marketplace can’t be a good idea.
Since July I’ve gone through nine or ten books, SF, fantasy and mystery. My takeaways thus far are part obvious, part puzzling. The obvious bit is how strongly character-driven genre books are today. I think of SF in particular as a “fiction of ideas”. Two examples for me as Zelazny’s Lord of Light and Zindell’s Neverness. (Hmm, maybe I should change my surname to Zalazar <g>) For both of those books what drew me in was not the protagonist’s backstory, but the richness of the idea: Technology that allows select humans to wield the power of gods and to make religion “real”, and Interstellar travel controlled by a guild of mathematical savants/adventurers. The characters in these books were powerful and well-drawn, but they were mainly vehicles to explore the idea.
The newer stuff I’ve looked always leads with the protagonist’s problem: They are on the run from some trouble, or they’re recovering from a failed romance or job, or they are struggling with prejudice and repression. I get that people have problems, and that problems make things interesting, but in my assessment these books have humdrum ideas as context. I get that not every book can have a world-shaking idea but c’mon – give me something.
The puzzling bit is how successful many of these books are, which brings me to reviews. I’m not going to name any names here but let me quote some reviews. The subject book has thousands, 79% were 5 or 4 stars, 2% 1 star. I bought the book because from the blurb it did have a big idea, something that sounded cool. Some snippets from the 5 star group:
This book is one of the finest I have ever read. There is a question, about loving someone who has hurt you so unimaginably, and an answer that made me ugly cry. I won’t spoil the ending, but you need to read this book. The language is gorgeous, and the characters are very finely drawn, and their growth is beautiful.
What … managed to do with this story is nothing short of mastery. With a narrative steeped in so much history …, one might think you are reading a reference book. However, by weaving in these amazingly diverse and complicated characters and the more fantastical elements the tale transforms into something completely new. There is emotion, double dealings, and the exploration of social constructs and race all wrapped up in a beautifully written package. This darkly … allows the reader to immerse themselves in the world the author created. The vivid descriptions, the richness of the language, and the eloquence make the experience even better.
I spent some time within these pages because I didn’t want to miss anything, absorbing the story for all it was. Every moment reading this, I would always push myself to read just one chapter more. … is truly an epic fantasy worth reading. I cannot wait to dive back in for a second read.
Sounds great, right? There’s thousands of similarly super-positive reviews for this book.
Now a look at the 1-stars:
I truly wanted to enjoy this book. Hat’s off to … for the marketing. And, there are moments where the author’s erudition nearly salvages the otherwise dull, slow-moving plot and plastic characters who, as others have pointed out, are entirely predictable, if not outright unoriginal. I waited for the hook to draw me in, but it never materialized. Meanwhile, the author’s lack of nuance and subtlety was aggravating. The mystery surrounding the plotline is betrayed by an incessant need to state the obvious. author clearly thinks very little of their readers. In the end, I absolutely *could* put it down.
After 163 pages I can honestly say there was nothing to encourage me to invest any more time because all in all the plot and the characters struck me as childish. I could not dredge up any interest in the fate of anyone and the hocus pocus of … was absurd. If you’re old enough to be out of high school read the free sample before making a purchase. I’m glad I got it on sale. Only the second book in 20 years that I read over 100 pages and did not finish and I’ve read a book a week for over 20 years. Very disappointing.
Where did I come down? Squarely in the 1-star category. The big idea fell flat, it really didn’t transform anything. The characters were stereotypes, the plot was predictable, there was a too much political commentary, and the ending was the most depressing, unsatisfying thing I can recall reading.
The puzzling thing is, there’s clearly vast numbers of people who like this. I can’t discount their opinions, but there’s nothing from their reviews I can take away to explain them. I also went back to look at the NYT and WaPo reviews of this book. Each was only a paragraph long, and I’m skeptical they were even written by the review byline author. Reviews by bloggers seem to be about 3 to 1 thumbs up / thumbs down.
If there’s any conclusion to be drawn here, it’s this: If it was possible to predict was the next bestseller is going to be, all of us would be Stephen King. Just have to keep reading and, or course, writing.
Past few weeks I’ve been posting various quotes on Facebook. Here’s the story on the source of these bits of ephemera.
Two weeks ago Kim and I took a ride out to Shelburne, Mass. Purpose of this trip was to get some grass-fed beef from Wheel-View Farm, a great place where John and Carolyn Wheeler raise Belted Galloway cattle just on grass, free from antibiotics, corn or hormones. It is just beef that tastes great and is great for you.
On the way back we passed an antiques store – can’t recall if it was in Turner’s Falls or Miller’s Falls, but around there. New Englanders will instantly be familiar with this kind of place: aisles and aisles and shelves and shelves of old junk, from keys to tableware to brushes and razors to aged toys to old signs and more. We were in no hurry to get back and you never know what you will find, so we stopped and browsed around.
The was a section of old books and out of the yellowed issues of Life and Time the title shown here to the left instantly leapt out at me: Elbert Hubbard’s Scrapbook. I snatched it up and without even opening it made my way to the checkout, where I parted with all of $4.50.
I know Hubbard, at least a bit. He was one of the great progressives of the late 19th and early 20th centuries, a printer and businessman, and founder of Roycroft, an Arts and Crafts movement that lives on to this day in East Aurora, NY, not far from my own hometown. (He is also the uncle (adopted) of L Ron Hubbard of Scientology and Battlefield Earth fame.) On Hubbard’s wikiPedia page you’ll find he was a socialist and anarchist, but his was a uniquely American version of those ideologies, melding a deep reverence for personal responsibility and productivity with a desire for social justice. If Hubbard is known for anything today it is for the essay, Message to Garcia. The message in this story of initiative, self-reliance and devotion to duty has made this work required reading in US military academies for decades; not many socialists nor anarchists are so revered.
The scrapbook is not Hubbard’s own writing, but writings of others that he prized. In it you will find quotes from over 500 authors: Twain, Wordsworth, Solon, Sophocles, Shakespeare, Savonarola, Blake, Bronte, Buddha, Charles Darwin, Eugene Debs, Cato, and Cicero, just to name a few pulled at random from the index.
Isn’t this amazing? I consider myself a well-read person, and having access to the information resources of the modern age, I should easily excel someone like Hubbard – who, as Mr. Spock remarked lived in a “stone knives and beaksins” culture – in exposure to great thoughts. Yet it is not so. My own scrapbook would be a thin volume indeed, compared to Hubbard’s.
We can debate the reasons for this, but it hardly matters. To skim through the Scrapbook is to quickly see how the progressive movement was born in words, wed to action, much as the independence of America was born in the works of thinkers like John Locke and later John Stuart Mill.
I suppose people today would find much of the Scrapbook maudlin, or naïve. In my sampling of it I have found to be energizing and optimistic. I’ll leave you with this quote:
EVIL is unnatural – goodness is the natural state of man. Earth has no hopeless islands or continents. We live in a redemptive world. Poverty will end; sin will die; love will triumph and hope will plant flowers on every grave. – David Swing
I imagine this was Hubbard’s belief as well – provided of course enough men and women are willing to take the message to Garcia …
Sorry for no blogging in a while, have had a lot of customer trips/meetings at work, and the activities for the return back westward for me and family have begun. Less than 2 months till we are all back home, where doubtless we’ll dream of India the way we dream of Massachusetts now. Anyway, on to this longish posting.
I daresay there is no Westerner more famously associated with India than Rudyard Kipling. As children we saw the Jungle Book cartoon and probably read Rikki-tikki-Tavi. As we became older we saw the Man Who Would Be King, and possibly saw and read his great novel, Kim. Finally, there is his poetry, inescapable from anyone who took an English Lit class 40 years ago, such as this from his famous Recessional:
God of our fathers, known of old – Lord of our far-flung battle line – Beneath whose awful hand we hold Dominion over palm and pine – Lord God of Hosts, be with us yet, Lest we forget – lest we forget!
I’m afraid today neither East nor West has a great view of Kipling. Here in India he is typically dismissed as a racist, though perhaps a congenial one. And in the West, he is alternately lauded then excoriated as a dead white guy.
I knew some of that when I was in the bookseller’s and saw Kipling Sahib, by Charles Allen. But frankly my motivation to get the book was boredom – there’s not a lot to do out here and all we Salazars pass a lot of time by reading.
Kipling Sahib was a welcome surprise. The author, Charles Allen, comes of a long-time Anglo-Indian family and his grandfather, George Allen, was founder of the newspaper The Pioneer. It was George Allen who employed Kipling as a journalist and later as associate editor, and so connected with the Kipling family, as ex-patriates were wont to do in those days, in a way that persisted over generations.
The details related here were unknown to me and fascinating. Rudyard’s father, John Lockwood Kipling, came to India to as a member of an industrial academy, to teach Indians to make sculptures, moldings, and other architectural adornments prized by Victorian architecture. An accomplished illustrator he created many telling portraits of Indian life, such as this:
Rudyard was himself born in Mumbai, in Dec. 1865 soon after the arrival of J.L. and his wife Alice in India. An episode of Kipling’s early life that Allen relates near the start of the book sets the tone for all to follow:
… a story related by Alice Kipling to her son’s first biographer, of the four year old [Rudyard] walking hand in hand with a Maratha ryot or peasant cultivator over a ploughed field and calling back to his parents in the vernacular, “Goodbye, this is my brother.”
The word for brother the small Kipling must have used is bhā’ī, the same in Hindi and Marathi. Certainly people use this for their siblings, but bhā’ī has broader meaning here, it can mean a friend you would do anything for, or one you depend on to do the same for you. Your baṛē bhā’ī or bahut bhā’ī, your big brother, is someone who looks out for you and your family almost like a father. In this the unknowing Rudyard was almost saying, “This is my new family.”
The life of Kipling that Allen relates has a Downton Abbey-like quality to it. It was the Victorian era after all, and parents were comfortable with sending children thousands of miles away for schooling while they themselves strove for advancement in the far flung colonies of the Empire. This time in England for Rudyard, age 5 to 12, and for his younger sister Trix, was to mark him forever. It was in England while still only a boy he discovered his avocation for writing. But it was also an episode of loneliness and abandonment that was to inform all of his work and life to come as well.
Later when Rudyard became an adult and returns to India he has his share of excitement and disappointment in the highly insular and stratified society of British India, especially at its favored summer location, the mountain city of Simla. It is in Simla that the eccentricities of the British character conjoin with the diversity of India to create some rather amusing instances, like the 100,000 item collection of birds, eggs, and other natural artifacts that Allen Octavian Hume intended as source materials for an epic work entitled The Game Birds of India, Burma and Ceylon, but was sold off in the bazaar for kindling by a servant during one of Hume’s absences. This same Hume later became a follower of “theosophist” Madame Blavatsky, who claimed powers as a medium; J.L. Kipling dismissed her as ‘’”one of the most interesting and unscrupulous imposters I have ever met.” Later when Blavatsky’s deceptions were exposed and Hume withdrew his support, Kipling’s employer The Pioneer suffered greatly, as the paper had endorsed her.
These, together with numerous romantic intrigues, were the doings of Simla observed by Rudyard aged 17 or 18. Interestingly, Allen Octavian Hume went on to become a sponsor and founder of the Indian National Congress, the party that would fight for and ultimately achieve Indian independence.
Kipling Sahib also shows us Rudyard’s history and struggles as a writer. Kipling’s age was one where the Western world was hungry for information and novelty. Newspapers and books of all kinds sold in great numbers, and stories of far places were especially prized. Writers combing the countryside looking for exotic stories became commonplace, so much so that the guise of “writer” sometimes was used as a foil by blackmailers and the like, as Kipling suggests in The Man Who Would Be King:
“… here’s precious few pickings to be got out of these Central India States—even though you pretend to be correspondent of the ‘Backwoodsman.’ “
“Have you ever tried that trick?” I asked.
“Again and again, but the Residents find you out, and then you get escorted to the Border before you’ve time to get your knife into them …
“Residents” are British officers or officials, assigned to help keep order in the independent states. And ‘Backwoodsman’ was an obvious reference to The Pioneer.
As Allen relates it, Kipling seems to have been driven both by insecurity as a writer, driven to distinguish himself in the growing ranks of travel-writers and diarists, and by a desire of truthfulness, a kind of dramatic journalism that led him to focus on the lowly and powerless and not the powerful. His first success was the somewhat eldritch tale The Phantom Rickshaw, in which a man, Jack Pansay, has an affair with the wife of an officer, only to leave her for a younger, unmarried woman. When the first woman dies of a broken heart, the man is haunted by her rickshaw, that pursues him when he rides with his fiancé, the spurned lover’s ghost crying, “It’s some hideous mistake, I’m sure. Please forgive me, Jack, and let’s be friends again.”
The Phantom Rickshaw won a kind of prurient following, for affairs of this kind were a common but unspoken aspect of Anglo-India life; officers and bureaucrats were away months or years at a time, leaving wives with little to do and no companionship other than those in similar straits. Rudyard’s father J.L. never liked the story, saying he “… hoped someone would rap [Rudyard’s] knuckles for the unwholesomeness of the Phantom Ricksha.”
Kipling would stay on the edge of knuckle-rapping his whole career. For all that he championed British Imperialism in works such as The Recessional and The White Man’s Burden, in writings like Soldier Stories he related the perspective, and courage, of the lower-classes, both brown and white. A typical example is The Drums of the Fore and Aft. In this story, a regiment of new recruits has two British war-orphans for drummers, Jakin and Lew, always undisciplined, but longing for the day when they would be men and full privates in the regiment. In a battle in Afghanistan the regiment cuts and runs, but Jakin and Lew stay, all alone playing drum and fife as they march out against the Pathans. They are cut down, but their courage rallies the shamed regiment who drive off the enemy. At the end of the story the Brigadier and the Colonel congratulate themselves on the action, which in fact they had little to do with. Kipling ends with these lines:
But some say, and among these be the Gurkhas who watched on the hillside, that that battle was won by Jakin and Lew, whose little bodies were borne up just in time to fit two gaps at the head of the big ditch-grave for the dead under the heights of Jagai.
Kipling is a complex figure, no doubt. George Orwell wrote a famous piece on him, both condemning and defending. In fact Googling about while writing this post I came across old acquaintance David Friedman’s critique of Orwell’s critique. I rather agree with David’s point that while Kipling related many racist or oppressive scenes, what he in fact was, was a realist, who tried in his way to show the truth of many kinds of lives: of soldier’s lives, or of Indian’s lives. These truths may not always be flattering to their subjects, or convenient to those in power, but Kipling did put them on paper. Consider this, from the poem The Young British Soldier (from Barrack Room Ballads):
When you're wounded and left on Afghanistan's plains,
And the women come out to cut up what remains,
Jest roll to your rifle and blow out your brains
An' go to your Gawd like a soldier.
I can barely imagine how such realism was received in 1895. Even today this poem quite rightly resonates, as it was taken as inspiration by British troopers in Afghanistan, there again after a 60 years of absence.
So, should you read Kipling Sahib? If you are the reading kind, or a Kipling completist, or perhaps in need of distraction as I was, then certainly you should. Otherwise, I have to say no; the book has too much biographer’s detail.
Instead, if you have not done, you should read Kim. I have long known of this book – in it Kipling invented the term “the Great Game”, after all – but never read it. I assumed it was adventuresome, like The Man Who Would Be King, so felt no great reason to read it. But after reading Kipling Sahib, and finding many free editions of Kim on Kindle, I thought, why not?
I found this book to be wonderful. I won’t add another review to this already too-long first review. I will just say Kim is about discovering oneself, what is important. I am much taken with this passage, recited by the lama who befriends the orphan Kim:
‘Long and long ago, when Devadatta was King of Benares – let all listen to the Tataka! – an elephant was captured for a time by the king’s hunters and ere he broke free, beringed with a grievous leg iron. This he strove to remove with hate and frenzy in his heart, and hurrying up and down the forests, besought his brother-elephants to wrench it asunder.
One by one, with their strong trunks, they tried and failed. At the last they gave it as their opinion that the ring was not to be broken by any bestial power. And in a thicket, new-born, wet with moisture of birth, lay a day-old calf of the herd whose mother had died. The fettered elephant, forgetting his own agony, said: “If I do not help this suckling it will perish under our feet.” So he stood above the young thing, making his legs buttresses against the uneasily moving herd; and he begged milk of a virtuous cow, and the calf throve, and the ringed elephant was the calf ’s guide and defence. Now the days of an elephant – let all listen to the Tataka!– are thirty-five years to his full strength, and through thirty-five Rains the ringed elephant befriended the younger, and all the while the fetter ate into the flesh.
‘Then one day the young elephant saw the half-buried iron, and turning to the elder said: “What is this?” “It is even my sorrow,” said he who had befriended him. Then that other put out his trunk and in the twinkling of an eyelash abolished the ring, saying: “The appointed time has come.” So the virtuous elephant who had waited temperately and done kind acts was relieved, at the appointed time, by the very calf whom he had turned aside to cherish – let all listen to the Tataka!— for the Elephant was Ananda, and the Calf that broke the ring was none other than The Lord Himself…’
Soon (I hope) some posts about the preparations and perspectives on returning home. Till then …
I really wanted David Eggers The Circle to be the dystopian novel of our time. It isn’t – it is all at once too approachable, too light-handed, too inclusive and, oddly, too believable to be truly menacing.
And that’s a shame, because the subject of The Circle is an insidious one, a true and deadly threat, and worthy of a dystopic classic.
Here’s a spoiler-free summary of the book: In a future fairly near to now, a company named “The Circle” – a combination of Facebook, PayPal, Twitter, Google and others – dominates the worldwide internet. The core of the company’s success is an authentication service called “TruYou”. TruYou can be used by any third party application, much like Facebook’s OAuth-based service does today. However TruYou purports to allow unique, real-world people only – no invented IDs allowed; when you login with TruYou, you can only operate as your actual self. The great benefit of TruYou is supposed to be the greater transparency (get used to hearing that word if you read this book) and authenticity it promotes. No longer can trolls, scam-artists, sexual predators and the like hide behind IDs like “rockrDude882”.
Into the world of The Circle enters Mae Holland, the every-person protagonist required by a dystopian story. Mae is in her mid-20s, in a job at an old-school company she finds unsatisfying. To the rescue comes Annie, Mae’s college roommate, who in the four years since she’s last seen Mae has had a meteoric rise in the management ranks of The Circle. Annie gets Mae a job at The Circle, something incredibly hard to do as an outsider. Annie does want to do a favor for her pal, but mainly she wants allies; even from the first few pages you see The Circle has a cruel corporate culture, though of course officially performance-minded and caring. Mae’s job is in “customer experience”, essentially a customer-service phone rep, as was explained to Mae by her trainer:
"Okay, as you know, for now you are just doing straight-up customer maintenance for the smaller advertisers. They send a message to Customer Experience, and it gets routed to one of us … When you figure out the answer, you write them back…
“Now, that doesn’t mean you just paste the answer in and send it back. You should make each response personal, specific. You’re a person and they’re a person, and you shouldn’t treat them like robots … you should always be sure to inject humanity into the process.
Humanity, however, is the last thing the Circle is about, as Mae finds when the trainer explains the rating system:
“Now let’s say you’ve answered a client’s question … that’s when you send them the survey and they fill it out. It’s a set of quick questions about your service, their overall experience, and at the end they’re asked to rate it. The rating pops up here.”
He pointed to the corner of the screen, where there was a large number 99, and below, a grid of other numbers.
Mae’s first day of work is all about her struggles and triumphs with her score. In the end she achieves a 98. This news – the highest-ever score by a first-day person – is “zinged” (The Circle’s equivalent of Twitter) to over 10,000 people and leads to 187 follow-up comments.
You may be thinking: So what? This already happens at countless companies today, and I don’t see the world coming to an end. Well, 99% of what happens in The Circle is happening today – it just is not happening under the auspices of a single entity. The Circle aggregates everything and is the one thing that has a total view, which it uses to promote its capitalistic growth and raw power. Another example: In the course of the story, The Circle launches “transparent democracy”, a 100% public life-log for elected officials. A fictitious Congresswoman describes the benefits:
“That’s right, Tom. I’m as concerned as you are about the needs for citizens to know what their elected leaders are doing. I mean, it is your right, is it not? Who they are meeting with. Who they are talking to. What they’ve been doing on the taxpayer’s dime. Until now, it’s been an ad hoc system of accountability … But still we wonder, why are they meeting with their former-senator-turned-lobbyist? And how did that congressman get that $150,000 the FBI found in his fridge?
“So I intend to follow Stewart on his path of illumination. And along the way,I intend to show how democracy can and should be: entirely open, entirely transparent. Starting today, I will be wearing the same device that Stewart wears. My every meeting, movement, my every word, will be available to all my constituents and to the world.”
In the story, “transparent democracy” becomes an unstoppable force, driven by the insidious view that, if someone protests, they must be hiding something. The persistent holdouts all find themselves forced from office, victims of sudden discoveries of past poor judgment, ambiguous financial dealings, or questionable tastes in pornography.
I hope no one doubts the fundamental plausibility of this. We live in a world where a significant portion of the US population believes Barack Obama was born in Kenya, all based on publically retrievable information. Given enough money and media control, anyone can be ruined just by “facts” – no need to concoct anything. In the world of The Circle, The Circle has all information, all media, and everyone’s identity. That “closing of the circle” is the danger.
Here’s a scenario to ponder. One of the links in this post is to the Goodreads page for The Circle. I am a member of Goodreads, having linked my Facebook ID. Like a lot of people I have rated some books. Now, imagine if I listed and rated every book I have read. In there would be works like The Occupy Handbook, The Price of Inequality and The Myth of the Rational Market. Looking at these and other books I have read it would not be hard to infer my political leanings. Now, let’s say I want to get a job. Hiring today is done more and more through a small number of online providers, and has a heavy component of online analytics, looking at public internet data about you, like what keg-party pictures you publicly post on Facebook.
Finally, imagine that the online company that does hiring is the same company as Goodreads, as Amazon, as Facebook, and more. They know everything you read, everything you buy, everything you search for on the web. What do you think about the hiring process now?
Maybe that scares you, maybe it doesn’t. This is one of the ironic truths of The Circle. It correctly captures the reality that people aren’t frightened by this, that while (for example) they maniacally protest that affordable health care for fellow citizens is somehow destroying their liberty, they happily surrender liberty by telling everything about themselves to Facebook, to Walmart, to Twitter, and just about anything online with a nice looking web page, all for the sake of a few “Likes” on a cat picture.
The arc of the story in The Circle is embodied in Mae, who goes from angsty CE newbie to one of the 20-most followed people on the planet. Like so many of us, Mae never notices what happens, every step on the path seems innocuous. Things happen to people – which I won’t spoil for anyone – and much of the book’s message is in Mae’s reactions to it all. The lobster/sea turtle scene made me squirm.
I said The Circle is not the cautionary story of our time. I think its great weakness as dystopian fiction is it never really personalizes the threat, the danger. Everything happens on the internet, as it were, and that makes it distant. Again, that is part of the message: when your experience of destroying an enemy is not shooting him face to face, but through a drone attack you view by remote video, it’s a lot easier to follow through and just kill him. But there’s a catch-22 here (another dystopian idea for which we should be thankful) that by showing the reality of how this threat works, Eggers weakens the message about the threat.
The most powerful thing in the book is the slogan of the Circle, articulated by Mae as she starts her rise to power:
SECRETS ARE LIES SHARING IS CARING PRIVACY IS THEFT
Because of these three lines, if for no other reason, we have to contrast The Circle with 1984, which made famous three lines of its own:
WAR IS PEACE FREEDOM IS SLAVERY IGNORANCE IS STRENGTH
1984 is still the more powerful work by far. In a way, the quest of Winston Smith and Julia, the lovers of 1984, is the problem of The Circle: How to be private, how to be alone with one another. Yet, nothing in The Circle comes close to the visceral, personal experience of Winston in The Ministry of Love, Orwell’s vision of the KGB-like future intelligence/torture agency that enforces political correctness and combats “thoughtcrime”. Here a fellow prisoner loses all control at the thought of torture in the dreaded “Room 101”:
’Comrade! Officer!’ he cried. ’You don’t have to take me to that place! Haven’t I told you everything already? What else is it you want to know? There’s nothing I wouldn’t confess, nothing! Just tell me what it is and I’ll confess straight off. Write it down and I’ll sign it — anything! Not room 101!’ ’Room 101,’ said the officer. The man’s face, already very pale, turned a colour Winston would not have believed possible. It was definitely, unmistakably, a shade of green. ’Do anything to me!’ he yelled. ’You’ve been starving me for weeks. Finish it off and let me die. Shoot me. Hang me. Sentence me to twenty-five years. Is there somebody else you want me to give away? Just say who it is and I’ll tell you anything you want. I don’t care who it is or what you do to them. I’ve got a wife and three children. The biggest of them isn’t six years old. You can take the whole lot of them and cut their throats in front of my eyes, and I’ll stand by and watch it. But not Room 101!’ ’Room 101,’ said the officer.
Orwell was able to pull out the fear that is in all of us and place it in the light where it can be seen for itself: cold, cowering, heartless, and dreadful. The Circle verges on showing us ourselves but, at the last instant, it steps back and grants us too much absolution.
I did “like” The Circle, though you won’t see me reviewing it on Goodreads <g>. It is a fast read, though the somewhat nerdy sex-scenes might make you wince, especially the one where one of Mae’s lamer liaisons asks for a 1-100 rating so he can post it on his blog. (SPOILER: As women have done through the ages, Mae gives him a 100.) But that I think was part of the atmosphere Eggers was trying to capture. One side-aspect I really liked was the way it captured the faux-inventiveness of Silicon Valley, and the heartless nature of big corporate existence, though I think these are aspects that won’t be apparent to a reader unless they have experienced some of that first hand. I will say I disliked the character of Annie at the start, only to really feel for her at the end.
My final thoughts? I think it is part of human nature to care, to share, and to do the right thing. But only part. We are often worse in the aggregate than we are on our own.
Thinking on the title of this book, this came to me, something I haven’t heard in many years:
Like the hymn says, there is a circle that connects us. As long as we find ways to make that come alive, not with packets and posts, but with flesh and blood, I expect we’ll do alright. But if we don’t, we could be looking at a future that makes the brutality of Room 101 look like a merciful finality.
Like many baby boomers I can’t help being fascinated by WW2. The war was a constant subject of TV and movies in my childhood, from Combat to Rat Patrol to Where Eagles Dare to Hogan’s Heroes. As I got older and my taste for actual history grew, I started reading accounts and perspectives of the war. Among the things I read – we are talking 20 years ago or more – was Winston Churchill’sThe Second World War, a memoire in 6 volumes.
This lengthy work filled me with questions: Who was this man I’d formerly known only as a pudgy cigar-smoker, who shuttled across 4 continents in the midst of the most furious conflict in human history, meeting world leaders and crafting the conduct of the war, all the while downing copious volumes of brandy and painting the occasional water-color? Who was this man who, in addition to his famous remark, “Yes madam, but in the morning I’ll be sober,” also observed, “When you have to kill a man it costs nothing to be polite.”? Who was this great politician who was also a great author, so much so he was awarded the Nobel Prize in 1953?
Motivated by these questions, in the 1980s I read the first two volumes of The Last Lion, William Manchester’s biography of Churchill. Entitled Visions of Glory and Alone, they were published in 1982 and 1988 respectively. It would be 24 years until volume 3, Defender of the Realm, would be published, 10 years after Manchester’s death and co-authored by journalist Paul Reid.
Though it has been decades since I read the first two volumes, it seems to me the tone and pacing of Defender of the Realm is markedly different. Whether this is due to the change in authorship or the subject matter is hard to say, but DOTR reads much more like a weekly newsreel of the war than an examination of Churchill the man.
Perhaps that is how it should be. One of the key messages of DOTR is that Churchill, molded by more than forty years of political and military experience, and having had a perfect vantage for the great events of the first half of the 20th century, was the very man Britain needed in her hour of need. Aristocratic but not royal, old and not young, Churchill was nonetheless the nation’s Henry V when he famously said:
… we shall fight in France, we shall fight on the seas and oceans, we shall fight with growing confidence and growing strength in the air, we shall defend our island, whatever the cost may be, we shall fight on the beaches, we shall fight on the landing grounds, we shall fight in the fields and in the streets, we shall fight in the hills; we shall never surrender.
When we look back at history, events oft times seem pre-determined; we can’t resist the assumption things could not have turned out any other way. But something that comes though, in many places, in DOTR is that things could have turned out much, much different. In movies, of course the Germans always lose. Well, they weren’t losing in 1940. The German army of that time was savage, innovative, and gigantic. Taking no losses of note, the Germans had neutralized and then defeated a combined French, English and Belgian force that numbered in the millions, driving the English to evacuate at Dunkirk. In June 1940 by no means was any victory over Germany pre-determined. Most English expected Germany to invade, and to overwhelm and pacify England just as they had France. In preparation for this, Churchill carried cyanide, intending never to be taken alive by Hitler.
But, they didn’t invade. The reasons were many and even today uncertain: Logistics, Germany was spent after the Battle of France and needed time to consolidate; Oceans, in that invasion required a Channel crossing, but Britain still had the most powerful navy of any European power; Uncertainty, in that if the Germans did manage to land, they rightly believed the English, as an island race, would defend their country to the last man, woman and child; and Politics, as Hitler fully expected England, in the face of obvious defeat, would sue for peace. Manchester/Reid write:
The Fuhrer has assumed that invasion would be unnecessary. After the fall of France he considered the war over. In the East his pact with Stalin assured continuing peace as long as neither side abrogated it, which Hitler intended to do once the English came to terms. When Hitler ordered the demobilizing of forty divisions, he told Reichsmarschall Hermann Göring, commander in chief of the Luftwaffe, that all war plans could be scrapped; we would reach an “understanding” (Übereinkommen) with the British.
Hitler clearly had no understanding of Churchill and, by extension, of the English. Churchill’s refusal to accept the European common wisdom of accomodation, as manifested by the French with the Vichy Regime, was his great accomplishment. If not for this principled and obdurate stance on Churchill’s part, things would have turned out much, much different, and what seems pre-destined now might never have happened. If you still can’t evade the feeling the outcome of the war was predetermined, try to envision an American president of the last 40 years carrying cyanide and preparing to use it in the case of total defeat. I don’t think so.
Another aspect of Churchill that comes through in DOTR is the combination of his wildly active mind and his leadership style. To his subordinates Churchill seemed constantly out of control. Alan Brooke (later Lord Alanbrooke) observed “It is a regular disease he [Churchill] suffers from, this frightful impatience to get an attack launched” and that Churchill “… never had the slightest doubt that he had inherited all the military genius of his great ancestor Marlborough!”
But their was method to Churchill’s madness. He understood he was waging a global conflict that would set the course of history for a hundred years. To focus on any single thing, a single strategy or a single front, would have led to disaster. Instead he pursued a strategy of many fronts and many activities and was always ready to bolster those that succeeded and stop those that stalled.
To concentrate on a single thing was very much what Stalin wanted the Allies to do, in his constant demands to open a Western front. Stalin understood that Germany, arrayed against the combined industrial might of the entire world, could not prevail. His desire was that the Allies spend their strength in head-on encounters with Hitler’s most powerful forces. This would allow Stalin more time and space to expand his own empire, and to insure the forces of the Allies would be depleted when he eventually turned against them. Churchill’s strategy of first confronting Italy and Germany in North Africa, and then in Italy itself – something by no means initially supported by Roosevelt and his advisors – was intended to keep the Nazis off balance, but also to create a presence in the East, so that the Allies could take positions in Eastern Europe when the time was right.
Alas, it was not to be. American Generals like John Lucas and Mark Clark were too cautious in the Italian campaign, completely wasting the surprise at Anzio and generally focusing on annihilating Germans face to face rather than neutralizing their ability to fight. Churchill had a vision of taking Rome by April 1944, and from there striking quickly into the Balkans and thence to Austria. Instead the Italian campaign stabilized and the Allies devoted all attention to Overlord in Normandy. When in May 1945 the Americans, British and Russians finally joined forces in a conquered Berlin, the Red Army had already taken Poland, Czechoslovakia, Hungary and much more of Eastern Europe – essentially the territory marked by the Iron Curtain Churchill would later describe in his famous speech of 1946:
From Stettin in the Baltic to Trieste in the Adriatic an iron curtain has descended across the Continent. Behind that line lie all the capitals of the ancient states of Central and Eastern Europe. Warsaw, Berlin, Prague, Vienna, Budapest, Belgrade, Bucharest and Sofia, all these famous cities and the populations around them lie in what I must call the Soviet sphere, and all are subject in one form or another, not only to Soviet influence but to a very high and, in some cases, increasing measure of control from Moscow. Athens alone — Greece with its immortal glories — is free to decide its future at an election under British, American and French observation. The Russian-dominated Polish Government has been encouraged to make enormous and wrongful inroads upon Germany, and mass expulsions of millions of Germans on a scale grievous and undreamed-of are now taking place. The Communist parties, which were very small in all these Eastern States of Europe, have been raised to pre-eminence and power far beyond their numbers and are seeking everywhere to obtain totalitarian control. Police governments are prevailing in nearly every case, and so far, except in Czechoslovakia, there is no true democracy.
As writing, I found Defender of the Realm to have a good pace, constantly weaving in Churchill’s views and activities with the unfolding events of the war. The later chapters on Churchill’s post-war life and accomplishments are slower moving, but the links that were made to the younger Churchill – the writing, the socializing, the continued brandy and cigars – all serve to show how Churchill’s authentic self was always there. The war did not make him – he made the war.
I’ll leave off this part of this long post (sorry for that) with my favorite image from DOTR:
Smoking a long cigar and stroking his cat, Nelson, he [Churchill] prowled the corridors of No. 10 wearing a soldier’s steel helmet (called by all a “tin hat”), a crimson dressing gown adorned by a golden dragon, and monogrammed slippers complete with pom-poms. Sometimes he carried on anthropomorphic conversations with Nelson (including an admonition to be more stouthearted after the cat flinched in an air raid).
Churchill was one of the architects of the modern world, a world where we in the West enjoy the benefits of tolerance, democracy, and capitalism. What have we done with the world Churchill bequeathed us? One answer to that, at least, comes in The New Digital Age, by Google Executive Chairman Eric Schmidt and Google “Director of Ideas” Jared Cohen, a quasi-futuristic view of how information technology will transform daily life around the world in the coming decades.
You may recall this book from a previous post of mine, where I quoted Julian Assange, who described the book as an “expertly banalized version of tomorrow’s world”.
I have to say that now having read TNDA, I get what he meant. Schmidt and Cohen lay out a world where smartphones and pervasive internet, well, just make everything all right. An example:
The future will usher in an unprecedented era of choices and options. While some citizens will attempt to manage their identity by engaging in the minimum amount of virtual participation, others will find the opportunities to participate worth the risk of exposure they incur. Citizen participation will reach an all-time high as anyone with a mobile handset and access to the Internet will be able to play a part in promoting accountability and transparency. A shopkeeper in Addis Ababa and a precocious teenage in San Salvador will be able to disseminate information about bribes and corruption.
Or, how about this:
People who try to perpetuate myths about religion, culture, ethnicity or anything else will struggle to keep their narratives afloat amid a sea of newly informed listeners.
The main point of this book seems to be dishing out relentless naiveté to the effect that, whatever social ill is on your mind, the internet will magically fix it. To be truthful, the book is not 100% internet rah-rah. Here and there Schmidt/Cohen chill the fragrant sponge of fermenting digital dough with a few colder observations:
As part of their virtual containment strategies, states will undertake a series of transparency gestures, releasing crumbs but withholding the bulk of information they possess. These states will be congratulated for exposing their own institutions and even their own past crimes … Manufacturing transparent-looking documents and records will not be difficult for these regimes – in the absence of contradictory information (such as leaked original documents) there’s little hope of proving them false.
Jared Cohen seems a serious guy – before his Director of Google Ideas gig he was a Fellow at the Council on Foreign Relations, and staffer to both Condoleeza Rice and Hillary Clinton. But I have to say, despite the subject matter he and Schmidt undertake – Identity, Government, Revolution and Terrorism – this is not a serious book. Despite the various cautionary notes like that above, everything in TNDA is too pat, too suffused with the notion that technology always works out for the best.
One obvious example that shows how information access is not an unambiguous benefit is climate change. What Schmidt and Cohen would have us believe is, if you are concerned, just Google it and you’ll find the answer. However every reasonable person on the planet knows the “internet” has no such “answer”. What you do find is different sides of the debate using the tactics of the digital world to promote their information and to suppress or discredit contrary information. Does anyone think a regular follower of foxnews.com will suddenly be enlightened by something they read on npr.org? Without getting into my own views on climate change, if you tried to distill down what you get from the internet on this topic into a real answer, it would take years and you would end up being close to a climate scientist yourself. So, yes, it’s faster than checking out dead-tree books from the library. But it is not fundamentally better.
Really what this book is, is a commercial for Google. Internet, phones, and information – with tasteful, well-selected ads, of course – is what they sell. And, like a weapons-supplier, they sell their stuff to anyone who can pay. Google wants us to feel everything is fine, and for us to keep giving our information to them, to Facebook, to retailers, and to the government.
I don’t think everything is fine. I love tech, I make my living from tech, but no tech is an unalloyed benefit. I do think individuals need to take action, but not by “participating” as Schmidt and Cohen would have it, but by taking control of what they can.
An FB friend recently shared a link on this very topic, the Surveillance Self-Defense Project, or SSD. SSD is an Electronic Frontier Foundation project that informs the public on how better to contain personal information. A vast amount of data about each one of us is in the form of “business records” – information that is publically or government-accessible because we have disclosed it, either explicitly or in the context of a transaction. SSD has some good guidance on how to manage all that so you at least know what you are disclosing. It will be efforts like SSD that really enable the benefits that TNDA talks about, not just the raw existence of technology itself.
To wrap up, the best I can say about TNDA is that much of what they foresee is indeed possible and to be hoped for – but hopin’ don’t make it so.
Perhaps you wonder why I chose to review these 2 books together? Churchill was motivated by understanding of foundational truths, about Democracy, Totalitarianism, Tolerance, Opportunity and above all, about Power. He was an ardent believer in technology – he was the father of the tank, after all – but not bound by it.
What would Churchill say to our challenges today, of government transparency, of economic inequality, of worldwide poverty and repression? Would he erect a few cell-towers and make an app for that?
I think he would say: Never surrender.
Now if you’ll excuse me, I’m going to get my tin-hat and bathrobe. And who knows? when the monsoons abate I may get a few cigars.